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David Maxwell

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very nice

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-26-25

would love to read more of this series. was put together great, I enjoy your writing.

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needs a lot of work

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-14-24

If you would like too wright a cook book, fine.
If you would like too wright a trashy romance local, fine.
If you would like too wright a fantasy novel, fine.
But quick trying to mix them.
stop trying to make ever fight has to be a drama. If you give your main character power. Than let him use them intelligently, other wise you make the character an idiot.

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not a fantasy novel, more like a trash novel

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-16-24

This novel is so poorly written it is a waste of money. if I could rate it lower than one star I would have.
the wright has no concept on fighting or wild sex so the book is a complete failure.

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the problem with you authors

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-08-24

first ever fight can not be to the last breath and squeeze out by pure luck.
second one side doesn't get 15 attacks before the other side gets their first attack. By not being semi realistic, you make the story silly.
third your hero's need to not only grow with the story, but act according. this means starting a hero with high combat skills. That hero would act and use all of his skills.

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don't give me power

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 10-07-24

are you kidding, 1 AP and story is done. you where the leader of a country. now your a basket weaver

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you dropped the ball

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-11-22

I tried to give you the benefit of dought. As your main character having brain damage can cover a lot. lay off the sex, and focus more on what your wright. Here's were you blow it in this book. I am unpropaired for my operation and am trapped with two of my team mates. I have to hold my breath while in my shell. of course I am in a room with a 70 foot missile. humm, wounded how much air that would hold?

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silly

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-21-22

If your interested in a book of Mormon's for hero's. This is the book for you. Has the Arthur take to do a little research, he would have grasps how silly and stupid the book he wrote truely was.

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sad

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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-20-22

the Wright's need to get out of their head and actually be. reasonable. This is the third book, at this point the main character is no longer a child. If you going to write him as such. kill him and try again. no one has that much luck. at this point you just makes him a sniveling, crying, moron.

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very well written

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-09-22

Best book I have read in a long time. Can't wait to read the next book in this series.

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less is more

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-14-22

by the Writers need to climax ever battle. it made the character stupid and the story line become dumb. If I can boil you in your armer. I'm not going to wait till the last minute to enter the fights. The writer should keep in mind. the only fair fight is the one I won. fighting is not talking, and if I have killed an aponited ill stick with that on similar appointes till it doesn't work.

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