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no, just no

Revisado: 02-22-25

there are so many annoying things about this book that i just couldn't finish. the constant stat increase notifications during a fight, the social anxiety anytime some one is near, but mostly the whispering of ghosthound. thankfully I didn't waste a credit on this

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stop trying to force it

Revisado: 12-21-24

there are so many things about this bookni didn't like, but first and foremost is trying to force ANOTHER stupid joke I can tolerate the exploding, but trying to force the groping is just awful, Secondly this book is but what some many others are with having a horrid balance with progression there was barely any basically they find nyv and wool and the wonders that's it.
and thirdly the amount of time spent discussing skill, and abilities is awful
all that being said I am bothered so much because the other 3 books were great
don't think I will continue the series

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this has turned to garbage

Revisado: 12-20-24

3rd book in a row of next to no progression, stuff resources in his face, greedy cells, and over explanation, I am done with this series

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disappointing

Revisado: 10-23-24

the first book was a good start, progression, hood story line, interesting concept.
this had none of that there is barely any progress, it is most status, skill description, after skill description, after skill description, then stats, then more skill description, and for a change introspection and indecisive plans and you got it stats and skill description , and I have to say the star rating is moronic to me,
I won't continue this series

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overly descriptive,overly philosophical,slow overall progress

Revisado: 06-14-24

as the title says overly desceiptive, kinda describing a glass of starting with the glistening condenstion slowly tracing its way down the crystal clear glass, and the interplay of light thru that life saving water, what mysteries does that water contain, more than what could be contained in a thousand epochs( yes he loves the word epoch).now imgine that kind of drivel several times ...every chapter, and when the story starts moving along, and when theres a fight, basically evry chance he gets
now i will give some credit the over all story is interesting, but there is SO MUCH repeated information and so many stupid statements that if these books hadnt been free (except for the last 2-3 got them on sale for almost nothing) i wouldnt have bothered ...however i found myself fast forwarding ALOT , and yelling get on with f#$%ing story that i wont continue

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just bad

Revisado: 05-03-24

i spend alot of time listening to books, and this is one of the most annoying, first i hate most of the characters, rob and jeff are the only ones that arent annoying the other 3 including the mc are uppity little hypocrits always railing on how jeff does stupid stuff.....like what you ask, being rough around the edges basically and he is a bit competative side that is about it, he makes bombs and poisons, builds a steam powered bike, and a zepplin,
the magic system that is a basicly and advanced form of magic isnt, the mc even says several times he plugs in a new symbol and bamm fire dart not mana dart
and if you like having everything about building explained to you from an mc that hates being around ppl yet has whiteknight complex,and is more than a little meek,but gets mad when his friend jeff doesnt lile being a door matt then this series is for you
this series was free for me upto this book, and i still want a refund...crap series

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mehhh

Revisado: 02-01-24

the world isnt bad, but there are a few really annoying things first off i now hate the world alas, the narrator sound not do this genre, everything sounds dramatic and breathy( sorry cant describe any other way)as if all he had ever read was twilight style books for little emo kids, he isnt bad there just isnt range, no anger,no humor.....makes it very meh after first few chapters

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it was free, and still feel like i deserve a credit back

Revisado: 12-14-23

when they say the m.c. goes off on annoying tangents they mean it, i found myself fast forwarding SO much soooo so much and not caring if i missed something, when the story is progressing it isnt bad but that isnt as much as you want, and the amount of time he spends repeating what has already been said is annoying.
why is a grand master(nearly) and a poison master afraid of a thief
and the amount time the m.c. talks about sex with this amazing gf, get over and get on with the damm story its like 30 yr old with the mind of 14yr old wrote about his white knight sex fantasy.
and the jokes are just sad....not even cringu just....sad all i did was groan, the m.c. isnt mouth its ......just sad....the title review says everything , i am done with this one

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meh

Revisado: 02-14-23

okay, first there is some potential for this story, however some seriously annoying points are there
1) Mc is arrogant, and a hypocrite he has never made a mistake like the boy did
2) the stupid and annoying rabbit AFTER bonding, she isn't funny or cute you are trying to hard, honesty the rabbit was better before it could talk
3) he isn't mysterious and try to low key say it that ppl can't figure out who the real Derek is....is lame, everybody knows a troll, and there have been ppl that just like piss others off since time began

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if you have nothing else

Revisado: 12-16-22

first of all the Mc is serious emo, always about the rage
second this is written like some simp losers Dream of being the angry hero.
those are the two most annoying parts, but there are several other annoying parts, the story has enough meat to warrant listening if there is nothing else, and I have say the narrator was extremely good

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