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Grant Brown

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Not well written

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-03-20

For people who don’t recognize really good writing or solid narrative structure, this book will be just fine. For those who are deadheads or at least big fans, it will be just fine. Yes, the information in the book is great and interesting. Yes, Bill Kreutzmann is one of the coolest guys in the world. The problem is apparently Bill actually did the writing I’m assuming. Usually celebrities use a biographer or at least a good editor. There are many issues with editing, storytelling. It is basically an endless stream of micro anecdotes. The anecdotes are very streamlined, which might be effective for gathering the information, but on the other hand it doesn’t build up for a good narrative. Also, there is a hint of arrogance and Narcissism That doesn’t always sit well. Again not sure if it’s Bill or Someone else who actually did the writing.

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Will Patton is wonderful

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-28-19

He is so good that he actually even upstages Carol wack in this work. It is pretty cool. As much as you would want out of a an audio version of this famous novella.

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Laborious

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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-28-19

This work is truly an enterprise of self indulgence. Don’t get me wrong. I actually have a lot of respect for the author. I appreciated her contributions to Ken Burns documentary. I very much appreciate her politics and love for the natural beauty of the parks. But, overall the peace is hard to listen to because she apparently insisted on narrating it herself. Her voice is deep and interesting but her overall mood is so heavy and serious. It is heavy and serious in sections where perhaps it should be a little wider. It seems to me that she takes her self very seriously if not crossing the line into self righteousness. I feel pressured to care about her family and her relationship with her father as much as she does. I felt like some of the details and idiosyncrasies actually disrupted the narrative. I’m sure others Disagree with this. But, overall the work was difficult for me to get through. In fact I haven’t even finished. About three hours to go.

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Amateur author?

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2 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-28-19

It reads like a university research paper. Stories disjointed. Has potential. Mainly just lack of knowledge and skill with regards to writing.

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great info. quality of writing is inconsistent.

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-26-18

lots of amateur mistakes. needed a good editor. perpetuates, if not normalizes, the use of the vulgar term "split tail" by using it repeatedly. a sad thing if you're female. narrator had continuously overly enuncited, pressured, and theatrical inflection that called attention to herself while detracting from the writing. stories were great, had much potential, if better handled with the writing.

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