Chris Sheridan

Powerful... meh

Revisado: 06-28-24

He had control over multiple dimensions and magic to draw power from yet still struggles with the angels and nephalem? I know they are the big bad and the story needed MC to have something to have issues with. More believable if he was cut off from some of his power, but the power fantasy in my head thinks this should have been easier for him.

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MC apparently didn't get past 4th grade.

Revisado: 01-14-24

Volcanoes... Kids who made baking soda volcanoes know more about them than the MC. He made movie references to a movie he apparently didn't watch cause that also had relevant info as well. There are a lot of things like that through this series that I can let slip but this one almost made me quit.

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MC needs to get laid

Revisado: 10-22-23

MC is unstable teen who is a siscon. He can be having a convo with anyone and if his sister is mentioned he goes over the deep end with pritective thoughts and action. As i said he needs to get laid and have someone else to think about to even out his emotions.

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Jeez….

Revisado: 05-10-23

Marcus Jahn narrates in a very overdramatic whinny voice with unneeded high and low wavering speech. Story was alright though.

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A.I. Hate

Revisado: 04-24-23

My only real gripe is the MC’s disdain for the A.I. that helps him through out the story because it doesn’t tell him how it helps him or even just speaks. MC could be asking for info then get pissed if the A.I. speaks up. Then gets made when it acts like he tells it to act. (Yes Master).

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Almost to much

Revisado: 01-21-22

The story is great but the MC makes it almost to hard to finish at times. In any other book Of this genre this MC would be the d-bag that the other MC’s would have to deal/get rid of. Prime alpha or not the change in character is too much. I reiterate the MC is probably the biggest d-bag than most.

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Overall good

Revisado: 01-13-22

My only gripe is that the MC calls almost every male he meets a D bag or a—hole, but is probably the biggest a—hole in the whole book. He has no chill. Lot of things could have gone smoother had he not been a dick.

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Annoying

Revisado: 12-24-21

I like to put myself in the MC’s shoes when I read, but not even my vivid imagination could cover the stupid amount of euphemisms in this book. Plus the need to replace and use different words to describe things constantly takes away from the book especially the erotic parts. Not really erotic when every time a part of the body is mentioned it is so by a completely different word every time no matter how ridiculous he has to get.

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Problems

Revisado: 11-30-21

Hypocrisy and creating problems while trying to solve others. That’s all caused by the bad girl being given everything needed to succeed just to move the plot.

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To continue the plot…

Revisado: 10-09-21

You ever see or read a MC do something so obviously stupid like ignore advice or not just kill somebody who obviously needed killing from a distance. This book ends with both of those…

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