Hans A.

A first entry with serious potential.

Revisado: 02-15-23

As my first book from this author i think the series has copious amounts of potential.
Legitimately gave me expeditionary force vibes at times, with a number of significant differences to setting and setup. And so, i really hope the following books will fulfill at least some of that potential and really just take off and run with it.

Braun provides a solid voicing of the cast of characters. With the script provided i think he did a stellar job.
Will give his future books due consideration.

The author however has a great deal of room for growth, especially when it comes to his conversational writing as well as how he describes everything from environments to thoughts and moments of decision making.

Nitpicks;
Parts of the book read like a military brief written by someone who's a little to used to relying on buzzwords for filling out paragraphs. My main issue is his reliance on the word "mode" and his seeming reluctance to show the reader, and thus his overuse of telling the reader.
I dont think the audience needs to know that a character(human btw) has gone into "trouble solving mode" or "tactical mode", ever.

I will be checking out the next couple of entries of the series.

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Hellegers does his thing.

Revisado: 03-23-22

Interesting direction for the series, looking forward to the next books. Really hoping for a longer entry to the series though. Hellegers is marvel to listen to and the writing is thoroughly enjoyable.

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Manages to be great whilst feeling short.

Revisado: 07-17-21

I'd stick with this series for the next decade, its just that good.
The setting, the characters as well as the setup and breakdown of scenarios and quite literally his opponents does not get old.
Montana and the good guys will remain in my top 10 for a good while yet.

Hellegers is a quality narrator and does not let the audience down for a second through this entire series, at least thus far.

PS.
Don't let this become another series that just continually gets shorter for each book added to the series.. Neil has something great here, please don't let it die while its still so great.

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easily a top 10

Revisado: 04-30-21

writing 10/10
narration 11/10

pro's: world building, character growth, solid foundation and a seemingly well thought out "technomagi" system which the story thrives around.
con's: only the one book is out at the time of this review.

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Quality.

Revisado: 03-14-21

Brutally entertaining with fewer obstacles holding it back than his previous series. Kong and Daniels break ground on something familiar yet refreshingly new.

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Just Amazing

Revisado: 12-21-20

was not aware that an already promising series could top itself in its entirety with a fourth book.
well written and as always props to Luke Daniels for his naration.

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length and pricing

Revisado: 11-30-20

Short and even with its short comings, manages to be above average due to great naration and interesting setting & characters.

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highest quality litrpg

Revisado: 10-21-20

extremely well written, natural flow and brilliantly narated.
will be looking forward to the next chapters.

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Writing is becoming tedious and repetitive

Revisado: 07-26-20

instantly, overdrive, gangbusters and pull amongst other words are used so often I literally just cringe at the lack of evolution in the writers vocabulary.
Story is far from bad but the distinct lack of diverse vocab is becoming a major turnoff for me.

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Good but short.

Revisado: 05-24-20

Entertaining premise, interesting characters and a great narrator to boot. What turned me off from this series is the price to length ratio taking a dive.

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