Lorita

BS

Revisado: 08-19-23

How is it possible 2 16 year old plan and get away with a kidnapping, and no police are called? I can live with that but after the father locates his child he sits around arguing with said teens, instead of packing up his kid and leaving with the threat of turning in the entire household for aiding after the fact. They want to be together fine when they turn 18, the girl might be rich but she is still a minor. Then the attitude of his daughter scratching up her father’s arms, where he has never abused her she can’t say the same. Just as I was getting fed up this book fell into the crapper. When the father said she could stay, and he would too. I am skipping to about chapter 40 and see if it gets better!

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Taylor;

Revisado: 07-08-23

I bought all three books , but I hated Taylor so much I skipped all chapters that started with her. I already hated female leads (yes I am a woman) because all writers want to be so PC that they forget to make a woman a woman. If you write a woman with all the characteristics of a man just make her into the man you want her to be. I truly hated Taylor!!!

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Released too soon:

Revisado: 04-12-23

DUDE! How you gonna just leave a sistah hanging like diz 3 years really? What’s my boy doin down there? Did my boy the Ssgt. Get a respawn due to being a companion of Richter? Come on dude give up the battle of the Bugbears and the betrayal of the theft people can’t remember that clans name. Does Ritchie’s set up the death mage over the other place of power under his control w/ a army of the undead? Come on conclusions are needed!!!

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L’DMAO

Revisado: 01-24-23

This was so funny please, please be this care free when writing the next book in the series…. Truly worth the read if you need a smile.

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Interesting but…

Revisado: 06-08-22

The story line is good, but the earning system sucks. At the end of the book those beeps are WAY TOO LOUD, which made me have to miss out on the funny bloopers which I love when added. Plz adjust the volume on those for other readers with sound triggers for migraines.
Thnx Ms.Smith

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Totally out there with this book!

Revisado: 05-14-22

I can truly say this writer should really have their head examined! Not sense my first book of Steven King, have I been so in trolled with a crazy mind. This was totally something new, this takes (BDSM) SUB-MISSIVES to a the extreme with a little bit of brain washing. Don’t forget the backstabbing, and underhanded dealing. This book is a great read if the read has a twisted mind like ours.
Thnx

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Love the story; but hate the time between books

Revisado: 05-03-22

Love story line is great, but it is going on 2yrs sense this was released. I don’t like the the only gay character is forced to be straight, forced to be a horn dog. Then the only true human that could have come to this world as a higher power, as become just another gun toting killer after knowing the evil of guns in our world.

Then the story took the turn all books are taking, lovely Christina the caregiver has now become butch. Their love story was great she wasn’t a pushover but a strong woman who knew her own self worth just a little shy. Every writer thinks a strong woman has to be a mannish woman with the strength of a man. Can anyone find a woman anymore that can be strong without taking the roll of her man.

And yes I am a woman, but I don’t have to out muscle my husband to rule the roost. Make women, women, and men, men but still let them be strong. Come to my house start some stuff and I can turn my broom into a bo-staff whip some ass and then order a new broom on Amazon and still sweep the porch, without my dinner burning.
Thnx u very much

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With a hope and a prayer:

Revisado: 07-15-21

With a hope and a prayer I write this review, the voice and story line so fair are great kept me interested all through the series. I will await the next series to be completed, but please keep the main characters voices the same. I truly hate when I get used to what my characters should sound like and a author chances them. It causes me to never complete the next series in a books set. Then if I can I will return the entire series and in my personal library I put a black star by the author’s name, never trusting that author again to draw me into their world of fantasy. I love and trust my author’s to take me on journeys sense I became ill, so when they fail, the trust is broken. My audible books are my escape from some of my pain, so please finish the second part of this series as strong as the first because I am waiting with baited breathe... (GREAT JOB)!

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OMG! THE VOICES FOR THE CHARACTERS FROM BOOK I

Revisado: 05-04-21

IF I could have tossed the book into the trash and still found out the ending I would have. I keep losing the thread having to rerun over and over when those characters are read for.

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You’ ve totally screwed me...(WHY?!!!?)

Revisado: 08-29-20

I was totally hooked up until you switched character readers. Now I can’t get into the third book. With that change I can’t even give a thought the content on the story line. Please, get my original readers back.

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