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author sucks with characters.

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-11-23

This world is interesting and semi unique. Sadly, the author keeps making 3 major mistakes. He writes all characters as idiots. even supposedly old and wise people are stupider then a middle schooler ( main character party doesn't really get out of elementry.) Lastly, he forces the ploy by changing things out of the blue with organic reason and making minor people magically able to do things or incapable depending on what he wants to do. kept hoping the author would get better and write growth. sadly he seems to backtrack more then grow.

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no consistency

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-05-23

the author seems to just throw stuff in to get where he wants in the story. I want to make Mc less tied down, I will let a minor powered keeper have the ability to destroy a powerful connection. I want him to be alone, I will have the same keeper miraculously power him so someone that is one the level of gods not be able to remember him.... of and everyone is a whiny 5 year old. ya, that works.....

His role model/ training man is just totally shitty at actually training and not being an abusive bully. it's like the author wanted to have him modeled after a US Drill Sargent, not really getting that he is just a verbally abusive and horrible trainer. Yet magically, he can get them to learn.

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why the pause all the time?

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-30-20

the story is good and the performance is well done. Unfortunately, there is a few second dead air at every chapter end and start. I kept thinking audible was closing or mystery pausing me.

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good way to end the

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-09-18

I loved this book. Steve ended his arc like his other books, plenty of action and wondering what the next book will hold.

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great start

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-12-18

Love this series!!! The first story is a bit slow as they build but so worth getting through

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Some issues on both story and performance.

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-02-17

Not a bad story overall. My major issues is the author really needs to get a editor to proof for for consistency. They kept changing names of God's with others and even within a chapter the story changes facts. PROOFING NEEDED.

As for the performance, the sound comes out scratchy and distant like it was recorded in a low quality sound stage. Many parts of the story when different people talk volume changes drastically. This causes you to miss part and then feel like you are screamed at.

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