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Stupid

Revisado: 09-30-24

The dialogue and plot of this story is just stupid. I should have DNF’d but apparently I hate myself.

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The Narrator

Revisado: 06-03-24

makes everything sound far too dramatic. Her breathy over acting is really annoying.
The story over all is fairly good, but the author over explains everything like the reader is 5 and can’t remember anything. Like the amount of times that she explains that something was “because of Oberron’s protection” is really repetitive - that was a major plot point. No one has forgotten it.

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I don’t know why I hate myself

Revisado: 03-25-24

I don’t know what I was thinking after the first one. This one is just as bad. I am baffled by the good reviews for both books - are we all reading the same books??

First: the plot. Transparent and predictable. SPOILER ALERT: of course he’s the prince. Duh. Are we shocked? Yawn.
The main female character (I honestly keep forgetting most of the characters’ names, they aren’t memorable) makes the stupidest decisions. You’re going to have a full on conversation with your enemy and just give them everything you know? Good lord. Like the conversation she has with the prince’s sister? What was that? For a princess who grew up with court politics, this girl is just stupid.

This is also the slowest damn book ever. The first and second books could have one with all the extra crap cut out.
Also, please say “monster” one more time. 8,678,452 times is not enough.

Now for the narrator:
You know those stories about people who pretend to be ASL interpreters and then it comes out that they were signing gibberish? That’s this narrator. I highly doubt she’s ever narrated ANYTHING, and I would be shocked to find out she’s ever read a book out loud at all.
She sounds like a mix of AI and Moira Rose from Schitts Creek. Every character, especially those from the same family, has a different, baffling accent and the ACCENTS CHANGE HALF WAY THROUGH A SENTENCE. WHAT?! I want to email her personally and tell her to knock it off, it makes me so mad. I cannot express how much I hate this narrator and I have no idea how she got hired for this. She’s trying to do this sultry, whiney, whispery voice for every single character and it’s just so bad. Reading this book on kindle makes it a little more tolerable because you don’t have to hear Moira Rose say “mhunster” every other word.

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Stupid

Revisado: 03-22-24

Does the narrator know how to read? Does she know that you pause at the punctuation and not just after every word. She also does this weird “sultry” lilting voice that makes everything sounds like a hiss or a question. She also far too breathy about everything, like she’s trying to make dinner sound like the sexiest thing to ever happen.

The story. Omg. I’m on chapter 7. The main characters just met and he’s shoving his fingers in her mouth and acting territorial? And she thinks thats hot? I love some smut but wtf.

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The narrator..

Revisado: 03-11-24

makes this intolerable at times. The story is good, minus some little things that are annoying (a millee? Really. You’re just going to add some extra letters and call it a different unit of measurement? Girl just say mile) but the narrator is the most annoying person ever. She sounds like she’s going to burst into tears for half of the book and it makes the main a whiney, sniveling weakling instead of a woman with a backbone. I wasn’t going to finish it but then I switched to reading it on kindle and it got so much better.
I’ll do a real review of the series on Goodreads, but I had to talk about this narrator.

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Yucky

Revisado: 10-02-23

Lost me the minute that the prince made her orgasm in front of a whole room of men in a display of dominance. I usually love this author but this one is just gross feeling. It’s cheap sex scenes, no character or plot development and a grody feeling of men being possessive over a play thing. Super disappointed.
The narrator also makes the main character seem like a breathless simpering nitwit.

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