Issac

Good Story so far

Revisado: 04-14-25

I enjoy that the MC isn’t an overpowered foul mouthed moron. The story takes some time to ease into as the world and character building are at the fore. This make the story rich as the reader can understand the characters motivations and why he is the way he is. Loved it enough to leave a review.

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Descent story mired with F-word fill

Revisado: 03-26-25

I really enjoyed the story but it seemed that the only swear word or out bursts of anger/shock/outrage was met with the same liberal use of the f-word.

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Continue to impress

Revisado: 03-24-25

I’m enjoying the highs and lows. An MC that makes mistakes and grows from them.

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A tasteful Litrpg

Revisado: 03-24-25

A good story that doesn’t rely on swearing to act mature. Great characters who I very much look forward to following in future books.

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Less love my wives and more plot

Revisado: 01-06-25

I've enjoyed the series so far, and there is quite a bit of backstory expansion. However, every chapter with the MC seems to involve which of his wives he is going to bed. It was fine at first, but it's getting in the story's way to the point that the plot is becoming secondary. I hope this changes in the next book. The story hooked me, and the consent reference to the MC getting it on with his wives will drive me away.

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Need more time in the oven

Revisado: 11-27-24

It's an interesting premise, but it has been done. The world is not nearly developed enough to be exciting, and all the system elements are at the surface level. There is no explanation for why the system exists; the reader is expected to go with it. The main character never faces an actual setback and walks into power. The book gets boring the longer it goes on until you stop caring what is happening.

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Intresting Concept, but gets stale

Revisado: 11-27-24

Pros:
The first book was fun and interesting. I generally like slow-burn progression. The character has the motivation to succeed, and the world is reasonably rich.

Cons:
The second book is unfocused. The overarch teases never materialize as interesting. The main character is somehow a goof-up who is always just a hair away from a court martial despite being no different from other marines. All of this leads the second half to get stale and uninteresting fast.

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The uncertain about the story and language.

Revisado: 09-04-24

I’m all for the slow burn on a progressive fantasy but there is almost no burn. The most interesting part of the story was in the first third of the book. Afterwards the protagonist gets quiet and distrustful to the point of dislikability. I get he is 10 and scared and has reasons but his actions are fairly callous in most regards.

Personal point of issue. If you’re going to create a fantasy world create your own curse words. The F-bomb every time someone gets made is just annoying to the point of giving it 3 stars. That alone will be the reason I’ll not continue with book two.

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Two different books?

Revisado: 05-03-24

Why did the main character start out special only to change mid way through the story? First a powerful cultivator to be replaced by level up mechanics. Makes no sense story wise.

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Directionless

Revisado: 08-09-22

The MC simply wanders from event to event with little personality or character. His triumphs feel unearned and his failures have no consequences. He simple exists in a world far more interesting that the view we get from the his point of view. Sadly generic.

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