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David should just shut up.

Revisado: 04-19-25

Dude is a massive jerk. Im not sure im going to finish this one. David’s way of talking and thinking is just so grating. Narrator did good as always

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There is no way (from my perspective) these reviews aren’t payed for.

Revisado: 11-28-24

Mc is absolutely trash. The endless chuckling is annoying. All the characters are “witty/funny” in the same way, as in not at all funny. The book becomes so hard to read when the people are interacting and I find myself skipping conversations to not be annoyed by the Mc’s inner dialogue. She sucks SOO hard when she isnt fighting.

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This was written by a dude and its crazy obvious.

Revisado: 11-24-24

There was a peeping tom scene that added nothing to the plot except showing that the mc is “cool” with being peeped on. That was so weird and caught me up. Im a dude. If I caught another dude peeping on me, let alone a room full of people, I’m whooping his tail. He is going to know what my knuckles taste like. No person is okay with that and this is what women mean when they say men don’t treat them like PEOPLE. Like, seriously, that was weird.

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I loved the litrpg but less interested in the mc

Revisado: 11-11-24

The big issue I had with the MC was his whining about Magda being suspicious of him. It was fine at first but it kept coming up. Bro, she is responsible for the lives of others with enemies after them and you just appeared out of nowhere. Suspicion is a normal and extremely valid reaction. Especially when the mc IS lying. Like, yes, not about what she is worried about but he IS lying. So it just felt annoying to hear him complain.

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Even thinking of him as the villain wasnt enough.

Revisado: 05-16-24

Mc isn’t just an a-hole, he’s petty. He is so hard to listen too

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The whole Reese thing felt hard to read

Revisado: 04-20-24

One of those situations where they are as a unit rude to this guy that just wants to help and making it valid in retrospect instead of immediately. I hate that kind of writing. I want to actually feel like the guy we’re randomly being a jerk to deserves it.

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He’s supposed to be an adult.

Revisado: 03-21-24

The wild thing is that if he was supposed to be 15 I could excuse his behavior. He’s not. He’s had so much time to mature and yet he is such a child. Like what is his plan? He doesn’t have one. I get being mad but he’s old enough to have thought about his behavior. He’s old enough to realize he has zero plan. And that the ramification for his actions aren’t worth what he’s willing to do. Genuinely, if he was supposed to be 15 I could get past his behavior, but as a grown man I just keep shaking my head.

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A lot of really good ideas

Revisado: 02-09-24

If you spent anytime learning about writing you’ve heard the phrase, “show, don’t tell.” This series is nothing but tell. Things happen and it is incredibly unsatisfying because you are told about it, instead of reading it. I would praise this series and even recommend it, if not for that.

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Main character is a huge problem for me.

Revisado: 10-08-23

Every-time he has a thought about someone else it made me cringe. The mental sneering, referring to intelligent beings as creatures, the way he speaks rudely to some people but lets Tanya push him in a way that would get her stomped out. The constant comparison of Tanya to the goddess, who’s only redeeming quality in the first book was that she was around (not by choice) when mc was alone. She kept her word to him too, ig, but it felt like an abusive dynamic. I just know at the end of book 1 I wouldn’t have felt all the grateful towards her.The action and stuff was cool but the inner and outer dialogue makes me positive I don’t want to meet the author.

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Humility

Revisado: 07-04-23

The whole time I couldn’t get past the fact that the mc moves past the whole thing being his fault and demands to be treated with respect and like an adult. Like, bro, be silent for a bit.

It read like a cartoon episode where the mc causes a problem, then solves the problem and “learns a lesson”. But the whole time the observer is like “no, dog, you’re the problem. This was all your fault. People are forever changed….”

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