Musicalmommy81

Tragic story, too detailed for readers.

Revisado: 07-02-24

The story, though powerful, reads like a movie transcript for the visually impaired.
The details are too much, especially in the last chapters.

It's a compelling story, and would benefit from an editor refining the story. I mean no offense to Jeremiah's family.

As an audiobook, the narrator would benefit from having a female voice for the young girl characters and the mother.
The pacing of the reading was also very slow, and I had to turn it to 2x to read the second half.

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