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Dylan S.

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Story is action packed

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-05-25

The story is pretty good and has a lot of action. there's a few inaccuracies the author could have done little more research on. A couple of things like an AK47 doesn't have a selector for simiauto/auto and the SCI in top secret is not a level of clearance.

The SCI designation is for sensitive compartmentalized information. This designation is for source information. The reason Hightower wouldn't be able to talk about certain things would likely be "need to know" and not being in a secured facility.

There's another scene where Anthem escapes from prison by picking the cell door lock but later releases prisoners by unlocking the doors electronically. It would really be strange to have the doors in a prison have electronic locks that also open with a key. It doesn't make any sense.

The dialog was well written and nothing was way to over the top to break immersion. I look forward to the next in the series.

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Best story on Audible!

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-07-25

Primal Hunter is the best story on audible and this installment is no different. There's stories that drag-on for chapters but with overall good parts, but Primal Hunter keeps it interesting throughout. The author really knows dialog and how to write action sequences. He is very imaginative too. The characters are likeable and relatable. If I had any complaint it is that I want more.

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too much cultivation nonsense

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-13-25

Way too much meditating on the "dow," contemplating "truths," and etc. I just zoned out for much of the book. There a lot of telling and little showing. There's many parts I had to skip forward just to find more of the same. even the action scenes break up to expound more exposition. just get to the story already.

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Story doesn't progress much

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-09-24

The story is good but it seemed too short and didn't really progress much due to it taking place entirely in a dungeon. Jake, the main character, gets stronger and it boils down to a training montage. a couple of new characters are introduced, though.

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childish but entertaining

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4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-03-24

The narrator did a good job. the story was imaginative but the characters are all extremely childish. The main characters are supposed to be 15 and 16 but act like they're 6-12 years old. This gets pretty annoying.

Even the supposed adults act childish. They're arrogant beyond belief or overly subservient. Either they treat the op main character with extreme disdain or bow down to him without anything in between. The repeated trope of "eww sex is gross" nonsense by the female love interest gets old too.

When that crap is ignored, the rest of the story is entertaining. There's a bit too much dues ex machina going on though. The negatives are offset by the price of one credit.

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need more

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-20-24

I really enjoyed this addition to the story. Sift and Ruin are comedic as usual and the story keeps meeting expectations. If I were to nit pick there's a few side characters that aren't really fleshed out very well and I couldn't remember who they were.

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nothing really happens

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-26-24

This one drags on. It really doesn't hold attention. Way too many esoteric terms that make no sense except to the author. Inexerable this and intrepid that. The Dow of bla bla bla. Zack was drown in "truths" or some other such nonsense. Then there's a phone book worth of names that are just thrown out there with little to no introduction.

Very little is actually described. It read more like a report on what Zack did rather than a story. I won't be continuing with this series.

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Cliff hanger

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-30-24

I wish the story would continue. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I really hope the rest is released soon.

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remember to do your puma checks

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-06-24

This series is the best lit rpg. The reading is engaging and the voice work is top notch. So keep your chickens safe and remember your puma checks.

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Lame premise

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-10-23

The story was written okay but the premise was lame. The ""hero" being a single mom is not realistic in the slightest. The story is pushing more than one myth.

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