B. M. Gulick

reads like a horn 14 year old wrote it at times.

Revisado: 02-19-25

Firstly, as litRPGs go this one is pretty weak there are much better but also much worse LitRPGs out there.
I would have enjoyed this much more if
a) there was less horn 14 year old boy at a sleepover with girls for the first time actions.
the MC spends more time commenting on the girls assesand bodies than anything else.
b) what sexytimes there were were actually well written (see horn 14 year old comment) .
c) the MC was likable. I don't dislike him, but OMG is he whiny and kinda pathetic which ruins half the enjoyment of these kinds of books.
d) there was more plot. it's thin, and seems like an afterthought rather than the purpose of the story.

I listened to it to the end because I hoped it would get better. it didn't.
the only slightly interesting thing was the very end (I won't spoil it).

the narrator did a good job and literally none of the stories weak points were their narration.

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divine inspiration or not?

Revisado: 07-15-23 El oyente recibió este título gratis

I couldn't finish this book, it relies so heavily on platitudes and the personality of the author.
there are things you can get from it that are good, but I don't believe everything withing.

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Not the best, not the worst a perfectly OK story.

Revisado: 05-05-23

My title might seem like a slam, It's not to write a good story to take a certain amount of talentell him that the author yes Craig. Clearly has. Nothing 1 About the book Wow me but not if it was painful to listen to. I might go on and listen to more of the series or I may not? It's that. Weird place between like and dislike

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The narrator makes this good vook great

Revisado: 05-05-23

Firstly, the narrator is great. He has 1 annoying voice for one particular event, but unfortunately that event happens a multitude of times.

Don't let that stop you from Enjoying this book.
I was intrigued by the concept of this book. I've been a big fan of stories like grand hope day since I watch groundhog K. This exceeded my expectations so much. I loved every minute of it. The story is engaging and interesting the characters are unique and I love zorian. None of that is what makes this story good. What makes the story good is that it explores humanity as well as telling an engaging story. What would you do if you were in a time loop? How would you use it? What would you do? Would you keep your moral compass? Would you be tempted to do things that you wouldn't ordinarily do? Would you be you by the end of it. It asks these questions and it answers them Through the interactions of the characters the story plot and. The author's use of a magic system that they have clearly put time and sort into. So often with things that were Web novels. It can tend to forget events that happened in the previous chapters. You get power creep and it can eventually get boring. The story however doesn't do that perhaps it's the nature of writing the same month over and over again where you have certain People and events act in similar ways every time, This also enables as to get a deeper understanding of characters character who in this volume is Not my favorite Becomes My favorite by the story's final end. The author did a great job on the story. The writer took and already good story and made it great with his performance. It has changed my standards for narrators.

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slow slice of life with a dash of magical realism

Revisado: 10-06-21

This book is not for everyone, but it is an amazing story. Worth every penny.

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Wonderful Dungeon Core adventure!

Revisado: 11-04-20

I got the code for this for free, I didn't realize that this book was the second in a series but the recap at the beginning was well done enough that I didn't need to go back to the first (though now I will be because I want to know more about some of the relationships briefly touched upon in this book).

This is a great dungeon core book with a twist that I haven't seen before, the characters were engaging and my only complaint about that was that I didn't get to have more time with the delvers (The end hints that this will be remedied in the next book!!!!)
Taka is a lovely character and I really enjoyed her coming to terms with her life as a dungeon core, whilst continuing her obsessive research into everything.
I don't read a lot of dungeon core books but I do enjoy the genre and I have to say that Jonathon Brooks is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors in the genre. He always comes up with new and engaging characters and worlds and I have yet to find one of his books that I didn't enjoy thoroughly.

There was a slight audio hiccup with the file, but I have been told that the corrected files should be coming soon, though it didn't really spoil my enjoyment of the book at all!

I really recommend this series and author to anyone who wants to try dungeon core books as they are great for people who a are new to the genre.

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predictable and somewhat mastabatiory author

Revisado: 09-18-20

I wanted to like this, I listened to it to the end, but this was utterly predictable at every single turn and I'm not an avid romance reader.
if that was it, then I would have given this another star for being mediocre but not bad.
however, much if kates storyline is utter mastabutory self congratulations by the author who self publishes.
without it this book would have been meh. With it it became almost intolerable towards the end.
The narrator did great, sadly the book just was bad.

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slow burn, with some heat

Revisado: 07-19-20

this is a very slow paced book but it is very enjoyable. some parts could have been cut without affecting the story one bit.

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painfully good

Revisado: 01-24-20

This book hurt to listen to, not because it was poorly written but because it was so well done. The characters matter, their pain matters, what they are doing matters.

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interesting premise not as funny as I hoped

Revisado: 01-20-20

this is an engaging book with an interesting premise, not nearly as funny as I was expecting but still a good book.

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