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this MC is painfully dumb and naive

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-07-25

The main character is very dumb. It's very cringe. He's also so toxic to the idea of killing as long as the one being killed is sentient, that he overcompensates. For instance one character will say "there are thousands of monsters coming to eat my children. Please great hero. kill all monsters" then he'll say "I'll have to kill thousands. I don't want to. Killing is immoral" its like he didn't hear the part about eating children. He's CONSTANTLY naive about the world and situation he finds himself in.

"Oh these people are suspicious but they told me a sad story about how they were homeless so lets let them into our town. why did those people I knew were suspicious push me over a cliff. no one could have seen this coming. Certainly not the advisor who told me to be wary of them. Thats a mistake I'll make a conscious decision to not learn from." I can think of several people who would have lived if he wasn't such a pansy.

Every time that adviser makes an effort to give the MC some logical constructive feedback on how he might improve himself or his holdings but no. He calls him a eggplant and makes no effort to learn. "My enemies are weak to my bow. The advisor wants me to train with the bow because I couldn't hit the brodside of a barn door but I'm too busy right now so instead I'm going to try and give my bow teacher the slip because I'm a man child."

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the time skip was odd to me

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-20-25

Im not that far in. The big points of the story are fine. maybe I'm just nitpicking but these small things are really bothering me.

Why didn't kaen go into his magic until after the time skip. Before the time skip he learned his fire shot. why did it take him two years to learn the lightning shot. Why did he stop at lightning. The jump in logic doesn't seem that far. If you have one element why not two. Why not four. He lived with elves for two years. Is a nature shot out of the question. It makes him seem dumb or unimaginative.

Also I think he should have done better against the Griffins. I get there're young but Dragons should be kings of the sky. Matched in ariel combat only by other dragons. but again yes they are young which may be an excuse. It was just sad to see them grounded so fast and easily. You know a dragon and all.

also in that fight why did Kaen get so flustered when the griffins dodged his shot. Your saying that every ariel enemy Elias put them against in the last two years had the dodging ability of a brick house. It all just seems like a lack of imagination or something.

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Jake seem like more of a coward now.

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-11-24

I won't spill to much of the beans but there was a fight early on in ch. 3 where Jake is fighting a hard enemy. He keeps using his illusion with little success until he's dog piled on and half eaten alive. Meanwhile I'm screaming at my phone "USE YOUR TIME MAGIC" if I had such a overpowered ability it would be at the tip of my finger ready to snap into place. Yet despite the fact my boy Jake has been in a bunch of fights by now, his actions in this chapter were downright embarrassing. These really aren't the actions of an MC in his second book.

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this series is both bad and good

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-20-24

To start off the level system is so confusing. there's a alphabetical system for buildings, spell books, potions and stuff which would be fine if it wasn't for the two other systems. Some items get a title like divine, exotic or demonic. Its soon hard to remember everything correctly. Then there's the next level system. This is for things like character tiers. the get titles like king, monarch, Saint or emperor. I'm on the 5th book right now and I still can't keep everything in correct order. Just use a numbered system instead of this confusing mess.

On the other hand the voice acting is steller. the noble voice he does is stereotypically on point. my favorite voice was Ling. Very expressive. also the PG-13 romance was very cute. lilya

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where is the next audio book.

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 05-04-24

I love this series so much. I check back here once a week or more because I simply cannot wait for the next one. the book has been out for 6 months at this point. I need a update to know weather or not I should just take the time to read the kindle version.

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My favorite part was when he punched a baby.

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-24-24

As good as the last two. Overpowered MC. Undead dragons and ancient deities. Drinking and punching baby's.

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one of my favorite progression fantasy

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-16-24

the story and world building is top teir especially after the 2nd or 3rd book. also Travis balree is such a great narrator. he makes this book one of the best litrpg's ever.

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