Jakey

Just filler, dragging the story out to make money

Revisado: 03-29-25

The book is just the MC going off on a side quest that should have only been a few chapters but took up the whole book. The MC in the book is an utter idiot and makes stupid mistakes and decisions. His stupid fake moral dilemmas absolutely ruins the book. This book makes me not want to continue the series.

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Political garbage

Revisado: 06-07-24

Series started off good. But in this book it got into politics way too much and just went downhill. No one that reads this type of book wants to hear about crap like that. Like half the book is just political maneuvering and it completely derails the story. Like I thought I was here to read about people with super powers fighting aliens, not a discourse about power hungry politicians. It just sucks because the story could have been so good but the author just had to ruin it.

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Disappointing

Revisado: 09-17-22

Yet another author dragging out a story needlessly just to rob people of their money by writing an entire book about a side quest that could have been covered in 2 chapters. Literally nothing happens in this book, the plot has ZERO progression. The entire book was just a build up to the next book. Extremely disappointed. If you want to waste 20 hours listening to some random details and story line that has like zero to do with the main plot then I guess this book is for you.

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So disappointing

Revisado: 04-26-22

The first book was so good… then for some insane reason the author decided to make Zack the main character in this book, which really sucked. Zack’s character is beyond boring, and I had zero interest in reading about him. It only made it worse that with next to zero effort Zack stumbled upon insane amounts of power in increases. Like my h*ll at least make him work for it. He levels up over 100 levels in like 1 day.
Of the 35 hours of audiobook like only 4 hours is even about Ryun. So if you’re planning on getting the book to follow more exploits of Ryun you’re going to be extremely disappointed.

The author did a poor job of creating and intriguing plot in this book, like nothing happened the whole book. There is no real plot, the characters just kinda wonder around looking for “power”. Especially Zack’s character, literally the most boring and dull story line ever. Falls in love with an evil person that has murdered as much innocents as Ryun… like what? Zack literally lives for revenge against Ryun, because Ryun is evil because he killed innocents… but for some insane reason is okay with loving a person that for hundreds of years has been killings innocent people.. obviously Zack has no issue with evil, clearly he only hates Ryun because he killed Linda.
Zack is such a loser, why the author decided to spend 95% of this book writing about him is beyond me. Not sure what he was trying to accomplish.
He could have just spent 15% of the book about Zack and gave some minor details about him growing strong to keep the rivalry between him and Ryun relevant.. and that would have been enough and I believe would have made a much better story, leaving the focus on Ryun like the majority of the first book did.
The book is also filled with about 5% of its contents writing about character sheets and stats, and randomly throws in chapters about random people and there stats. Like who the heck cares about these random peoples stats, it in no way benefits the story to tell us those things.
Also the plot line is turning into crap following the same basic storyline so many other litrpg stories follow… guess what the entire next book will be about!!? A tournament!! No way!! How freakin original!! I would have never guessed! I imagine the next book’s content will be 1/2 filled with glimpses of points of view from random characters then give a 10 min description of their stats….
Anyways, to end this rant: the book was disappointing. Will I keep reading the series: yes, because I love Ryun’s character, and I hope the author learns for his mistakes in this book, and gets back to writing about Ryun… but we’ll see I guess.

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Please don’t kill my daddy

Revisado: 04-16-22

The entire plot could have been solved if there were not stupid constraints on the main character. Why does the author insist that women won’t want their mass murdering psychopath fathers put down.

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So Good!

Revisado: 07-15-21

One of the best litrpg books I’ve ever read. An absolute must read. Do yourself a favor and give it a go.

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Probably written while inebriated

Revisado: 05-14-21

So bad I almost started to hate my favorite narrator.
Nerfed the main character, awful pacing, and the dialog was utterly exhausting.

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Amazing! Must Read!

Revisado: 04-07-21

Captivating! I couldn’t put the book down! Do yourself a favor and read this book!!

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Amazing

Revisado: 03-19-21

Amazing story! I can’t wait until the next book. So well written, amazing narration. The story keeps you engaged and wanting more.

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Best book ever!

Revisado: 10-06-20

This series is the best ever! And this book doesn’t disappoint! Will Wight you are the best!
Keep the good work coming!!

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