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An amazing ending to a legendary story!

Revisado: 04-19-25

First off, I must give proper respect to Valerios for making such an amazing story, and not stretching it on to the detriment of the story. This is the first story where I am not upset about the power of friendship overcoming an ancient evil! you have no idea how excited I was when Brock started charging up the "Big Bro Spirit Bomb" to give Jack the power boost he needed to win! I can't wait to see what else Valerios has to show us in the future!

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Inconsistent with who is speaking

Revisado: 07-19-24

I noticed that if two people are speaking, the author sometimes puts the wrong name in front of dialogue or actions. This happens the most when Roy is first reintroduce in the story.

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Too many stats!

Revisado: 10-17-23

I swear, it takes so long to get through all of them! Just make his stat page a new chapter so it's easy to skip them! Or, even better, JUST TELL US WHAT CHANGES! Here is an example for you, just to make sure you understand.

Strength: 247→300

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Donut just doesn't learn

Revisado: 12-11-22

This is just starting to be too annoying to ignore for me. We were told that she would grow as a person, just like any child would. She keeps doing the same things (The amount of times she says "oh! *posable enemy* whats to know *important information*!" Then Carl says "Donut, wait a sec. let's talk about this before you tell them." Then she says "Too late! I already told them!" Is one of the many examples of this.) I would except after the first few times, she would figure it out, and stop doing it.

She hasn't changed a bit since she first woke up in book one. For example, the first thing she does in the first book is equip a cursed crown without reading the description. One of the last things she does in this book is pick a class without even reading the stats or the description. (the proof of this is when she says "why is my health lower now?") She clearly read the name, read the first spell it would give her, and thought that they sounded cool, picking them without talking to her manager, or carl. Its getting super annoying

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Donut just doesn't learn

Revisado: 12-11-22

This is just starting to be too annoying to ignore for me. We were told that she would grow as a person, just like any child would. She keeps doing the same things (The amount of times she says "oh! *posable enemy* whats to know *important information*!" Then Carl says "Donut, wait a sec. let's talk about this before you tell them." Then she says "Too late! I already told them!" Is one of the many examples of this.) I would except after the first few times, she would figure it out, and stop doing it.

She hasn't changed a bit since she first woke up in book one. For example, the first thing she does in the first book is equip a cursed crown without reading the description. One of the last things she does in this book is pick a class without even reading the stats or the description. (the proof of this is when she says "why is my health lower now?") She clearly read the name, read the first spell it would give her, and thought that they sounded cool, picking them without talking to her manager, or carl. Its getting super annoying

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An amazing story. Can't wait for the next book

Revisado: 10-03-22

This was a strange one to be honest. For a boom that spends the first 31 chapters with the main character stranded in space, you hardly seem to notice as the characters fly past you. One small thing that is starting to anoy me is the naming scheme. It feels like the author is just throwing numbers in front of things that don't need it. Other than that, amazing stuff!

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The MC is a total creep!

Revisado: 12-12-21

I haven't even made it past the 1 hour mark, and the MC has sexually assaulted some poor girl! He also wont stop going on and on about "how mysteries and erratic females are!" He's that one dude in high school that no one liked, and he cant figure out why! Even worse, after he assaulted this girl, he forced her to "become his woman" and she just follows his instructions without question! Do NOT get this book!

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I can't stand the narrator of this book

Revisado: 11-12-21

the story is simple and rushed, and the narrator sounds awkward as hell. It sounded like he only knew how to do erotica. It sounded like the MC was finishing evey time he took a hit, and the narrator put emphasis on all the wrong words. It sounded like this was his first read of the book, and they just went with this take. If the book wasn't free, i would have instantly returned it. If you need to pay for this trash, don't bother

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A huge disappointment

Revisado: 09-11-21

This book was stuffed with filler. I couldn't even finish it. it took almost half of the book for the main character to even show up. This book, and the one before it were huge letdowns.

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One disappointment after another

Revisado: 04-09-21

Just to be clear, I was not expecting much from this book. The first book was passable, but the second one was much less interesting. Going into this book, I expected a few interesting fights, and not much else. Sadly, the book didn't even give me that. Here is a list of my problems with this book

1) The timeskip problem of the first two books is much more prominent here. Whenever the Mc is too weak to fight someone, he vanishes for a year or two, getting stronger completely off screen. This gives us no chance to guess how strong he is, and the Author only reveals the Mc's power increases when he's in the middle of what would have been an impossible battle before the timeskip. It always feels like the Author is saying "See how strong the other guy is?! now check this shit out! because the Mc killed a god, and drank his blood, he can destroy this dude like its nothing! isn't he so cool!?!?!"

2) The info dumps don't feel natural at all. Characters talk like this whenever the Author wants us to get extra info on the situation. "Ah! I see what you did! For the past 40,000 years, you have been putting your soul into the body's of your sons, giving you a kind of immortality, giving you the power to rule the clan form the shadows!" "You fool! you think knowing my secret will help you beat me?! to kill me you would need all seven of the Holy Sword Spirits! and I know you cant have them all, because I have two of them myself! w-what?! what happened to my Holy Sword Spirits?!?!" "You fool! they are my Holy Sword Spirits now! and I will fuse them into the ultimate Holy Sword Spirit! I bet you didn't know that was possible! hahahahahahahahahahahaha!"

3) Characters are randomly killed off just to make the Mc mad. At one point, a girl from the 2nd book shows up just to be killed off 3 paragraphs later.

4) The MC ia way too strong for any fight to really matter. Even when he's having "trouble" in a fight, he pulls a new, broken ability out of nowhere. It never feels like hes in any danger.

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