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Needs editing

Revisado: 06-05-22

The story is pleasant, the characters are cute, but the author should have her work edited. Phrases like “found a parking lot in the small lot” and “it was heavy, even ponderous” are frequent and irritating, and so easy to avoid by using a good editor! I will never understand how a publisher will pay all this money to a voice talent before having the novel edited properly. Not that I’m offering my services (wink wink), but I would enjoy helping make these cute novels even more enjoyable.

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Needs a thorough editing

Revisado: 01-23-21

The premise is good, and the story could be made to work, but the author needs to learn that less is more. Unnecessary drama (Oh, if I only could find an answer to my questions! My heart skips a beat every time this guy looks at me when I am very much in love with my boyfriend! Oh, poor me, I am quite self-assured, but always afraid!). Too many unnecessary adjectives and adverbs. And she needs to learn proper English. “Break out” is not the same as “break up”, for instance. Cliches abound, and sometimes combine with hilarious (or irritating) results. There are examples in every paragraph, except I need to listen again taking notes, which I am not going to do. The interpretation, however, is flawless. All in all, a good book to fall (frequently) asleep to, mostly because it is so forgettable that even the irritations cannot keep you from it.

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Needs a thorough editing

Revisado: 01-23-21

The premise is good, and the story could be made to work, but the author needs to learn that less is more. Unnecessary drama (Oh, if I only could find an answer to my questions! My heart skips a beat every time this guy looks at me when I am very much in love with my boyfriend! Oh, poor me, I am quite self-assured, but always afraid!). Too many unnecessary adjectives and adverbs. And she needs to learn proper English. “Break out” is not the same as “break up”, for instance. Cliches abound, and sometimes combine with hilarious (or irritating) results. There are examples in every paragraph, except I need to listen again taking notes, which I am not going to do. The interpretation, however, is flawless. All in all, a good book to fall (frequently) asleep to, mostly because it is so forgettable that even the irritations cannot keep you from it.

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Every single cliche about romance in a single two-hour story

Revisado: 12-11-19

Even though predictable, the plot is not bad, but the characters and the language are so ridiculously clichéed, it’s painful! And the author constantly gets her idioms mixed up. All in all, this was too irritating to even fall asleep while listening to.

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Irritating « French » accents!

Revisado: 01-30-19

The intrigue of Marthe is interesting although rather predictable in the end. The American side of the story is utterly boring. What would have ruined the story for a less patient reader, however, was the false French and American accents of the various protagonists and the obvious lack of any foreign language knowledge. Grammatical errors, intonation errors, cultural ignorance were prevalent. This was not a total waste of time, but I won’t be holding on to this book.

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The book is so good that even the male voice cannot ruin it completely

Revisado: 04-09-18

The male voice is too old,doesn’t match the character and does ridiculous imitations of females speaking even when the subject mater is serious. The female interpreter is excellent and the story is very good. Read the written word if you can - the audio book is a waste of $7.

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