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Gretchen

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Rage bait?

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-24-25

DNF at Ch. 15

The only good in this books was the narrators. Dean's thoughts towards Jason's sexuality did absolutely nothing but have me contemplate if I wanted to break my phone.

Every religious stereotypical thought one could have and/or speak Dean did. Maybe that was the point? Maybe that's the educational moment or message to show being gay isn't wrong but I couldn't anymore. The snark and judgement from Dean is one that made me wish a fictional character was real just to pummel them.

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Fifty Shades of Affairs?

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-22-25

First I should state I made it to chapter 15 before I ended up DNF'ing the book. It's nothing either narrator could have prevented, it came down to the FMC vengenfully having an affair, even if just once, in return.

I did like that this covered the topic of affairs and how the aftermath looks in the moment not years later. I was really into the book and what I thought was the messaging. I honestly felt for June at first and at times felt the urge to cry because of her pain.

Then June went to New Orleans and at that point the book completely lost me. Prior to her arrival to New Orleans, Drew's alpha hole, possessive nature was beginning to anger me. His righteousn indignation attitude towards what caused the riff between him and June made me want to slap him on multiple occasions.

It was June's attitude and behavior in New Orleans that gave me whiplash and became the books downfall. For someone who was a total witch, rightfully so, towards Drew after she caught him in L.A., I struggled to understand her need to seek revenge in the same manner. All of her other thoughts and behaviors I could understand. That one not so much. Especially when she gets upset with Drew for defending Lorilie, when she does the exact same with Noah.

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Cringy Young Adult Romance....

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-20-25

Reminding Avery is with Avery and Dylan in high school and the remaining half feels extremely rushed. There's very little backstory for the characters, in my opinion. They are more like one dimensional just not much depth to them. I

It feels like it the author didn't know what stage of life they wished the story to be in. Especially with Dylan and Avery in high school. There are times they say and/or do things that feel abnormal for high school seniors and virgins. Well, nearly virgins, since Dylan had experience with someone one time before Avery.

Other times, they act like even younger children. Which I get high schoolers can be immature and childish, but this feels almost toddler like. Then there are times they act as if they are in college or their mid twenties, and yet they are only high school seniors in those moments.

With multiple epilogues to pass through a total of eight years, I also feel as if the author wanted a more high school romance that followed through their adult years but didn't have a full plot point to follow along so they just jumped around with something more incomplete. This is where I don't think it would matter what voice actors/narrators you had, it wouldn't have saved ths story.

I wish I would have just DNF'd the story at chapter eleven but I held out thinking adult Avery and Dylan would make the story better. Maybe something would improve it, but it didn't. This is one book You could certainly skip.

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Representaton....

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-20-25

While having a toxic relationship isn't something to have as your favorite part of a story, I like the representation it provided. It provided an avenue for men to see themselves represented with seeking therapy. How a horrible trauma can have you become dependent on someone else in which they too experienced the same trauma. Etc.

I will say the whole martyr thing near the end did become slightly annoying but overall I really did enjoy this book. In many ways I felt like I was able to heal parts of me through Atlas and Drama.

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DNF at Ch. 16

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-17-25

There isn't really much I can add to be helpful. I think Teddy did as well as one can when it came to this book. CJ Bloom isn't someone personally for me, but they did just as great as Teddy did. I don't feel anything could have saved this book. I tried to push forward but when I can walk away and fill in the gaps of things I've missed several times, it's finally time to call it quits.

The FMC just felt whiney to me and the MMC felt the need to be the martyr. There wasn't much to either of their characters and the plot honestly lost me well before the billboard scene and Carter.

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Romance Novel?

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-05-25

I'm confused about where the romance part of this book was. I'm not saying it doesn't have it, but there were so many opportunities to be a slow-burn, grumpy-sunshine, angsty book while still finding ways to have intimate(I'm not talking sexual) moments. Then all of a sudden this enemies-to-lovers sort of trope just jumps in the smut department without any real plot making sense that it was going to that point.

At times, I felt more like I was reading an autobiography than a fictional romance novel, with hints of Gilligan's Island and the television show Lost. I felt that as I was beginning to get moved and really understand Ty & Daisy the author had another thought and went a complete 180, which then caused the momentum/pacing being made a whole other new story. It took fifteen chapters to really feel any romance in what is suppose to be a romance novel.

Nothing the narrators did or could have done would have saved this for me. The only reason I didn't DNF by the time I was ready to DNF was there were three chapter left. So what the heck. I made it this far why not finish?

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Awkward?

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-01-25

I feel there was so much opportunity here for a less awkward plot and a more in-depth story and character-building. The smutty scenes felt like teenagers who didn't know what they were doing. I stuck it out because there were times in which the storyline and plot were excellent and then it took some odd turn in which felt like the author didn't know what to write but didn't want the story to end, so they just threw something in and combined thoughts. It felt very lackluster.

The narration was ok. I felt that I was more listening to a presenter or someone on an infomercial. Sometimes I even had to check to ensure this wasn't a virtual voice narration. It just felt very robotic, especially the narrator's take on a male voice. The male voice felt very stereotypical female trying to speak male.

Overall there was so much more that could have been done and it just felt that the author wanted to write a book about smut but add in a very serious topic without taking the care to it that it truly needed.

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Almost 5 star until Ch. 21.

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-29-24

One thing I cannot stand in a book in the whiny martyr. Especially near the end. This book had me near crying and my heart breaking for Blake. Cassidy however was mostly tolerable until Ch. 21. Up until this chapter I was willing to give it a 3 star. Maybe 4 simply for Blake alone. I felt it his character and character arc is something many windows can relate too. I can also see how many could relate to Cassidy. What I couldn't stand was the instant something came back from Cassidy's past, instead of speaking she just fled and became the martyr of "I'll leave him before he leaves me". This isn't something I've ever enjoyed in a book and usually is an instant DNF. Since it happened much later in the book though, I finished it.

Nelson and Carly were great! I especially loved Carly's voice for Kaitlyn and Maddie. They can really nail a younger child as a voice actor. It truly wasn't them that sunk the book. It is that chapter in which Cassidy immediately goes into self preservation martyr mode that did it for me.

2/3 stars and this feels generous.

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Save yourself....

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-28-24

I DNF'd this after four chapters. I jumped around to gauge what happens throughout because after four chapters, I couldn't torture myself anymore. It felt like the author wanted a Travis Kelce & Taylor Swift romance but with the twist that the football player was a falling star QB. The irony in that though is that this book was done before Kelce & Swift's romance. It was filled with so many cliché's it became over powering of the story.

The narrators were amazing! I love both of them from previous work they have done, but there is nothing they could have done to save this story. I think the author should have taken more time to plot and outline, even sift it through another round of readers before publishing.

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50% uncomfortable 50% fanfic

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
2 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 07-21-24

The first half of this book was very cringy. There were several points in which I didn't want to continue. The back half just felt like the author wrote this book for them more than for readers. I get that they say, "Write the book you wish you read." However, this felt like a fanfic of some book, but a very uncomfortable fanfic. I don't think there was anything either narrator could do to save this story except maybe suggesting to the author not to turn this into an audiobook.

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