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Great storyline

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 11-01-24

After getting this far with the series, I think that the storyline has been fun and captivating. It might be due to the type of genre, but I did have a hard time with the "harem" aspect of it. This was entertaining and fun to follow, except for the panther girl. I found myself fast forwarding dialogue with her outbursts. I think that if she was meant to be a childish companion, then I wouldn't mind as much, but she was created as a lover... which started becoming annoyingly creepy. I kept trying to justify it as a cat-like personality, but I still just found her character really difficult to enjoy. I hope that moving forward, she becomes more mature and less like a child.
Also, while the genre may have demanded it, I also started skipping the sex chapters, as well. There were simply too many full sex chapters.
One other thing was that it felt like there was an overuse of adjectives and adverbs, almost like they were thrown in to create volume and increase word count. Especially since there was a constant repetition of the same descriptors.
I think that there is a lot of potential for the author to create great works. If the use of excessive adjectives, adverbs, and the panther-girl were omitted, I think the story would be among the top reads I have enjoyed.

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