not a victim

Capable of writing good story with great dialog

Revisado: 12-20-24

A dead horse, The ordinal story was great. a decade of retelling the same story.

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The wolf in sheeps cothing

Revisado: 12-11-23

half real, taking a shred of something real and weaving a fairy tale in of lititure. offering gold and delivering a swidle. bait and switch

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sci fi the first chapter

Revisado: 07-23-23

so bad, doesn't get another thought.
15 word minimum, lets see
money back,
couldn't finish.
I actually don't feel bad leaving a bad review

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Story Good - Revolting & Juvenile Sound direction

Revisado: 07-04-23

The story had a great premise,but so we get a bit overdoing the violence because the writer just didn't fully execute the ideas. Needs work-take it back & fill out the parts of the story that makes the plot sci-fi, .
just give us our moneys worth, rather than churning out books....
- The Whisper trend is a fad it's everywhere fast- At another website the chat AI is whispering, without vocal cords not to vibrate, yuck this trend is revolting. . . I think it started to titillate the listener by using Auto tune, and pitch and now mic assemblies etc.
LOL
The whispering was just terrible, I skipped over it. The Katherine McNamara is an excellent actress but who's idea was it to have her whisper through out the whole dang book? love interest - that part didn't really drive the story. We can do without another Si - Rom - Fi.

Take it back & try out a few other ways for the story to move the plot and then add more details to for the sake science thought into that great Ideas, there is something that the writer has just touched on the great idea of the plot keeps slipping away.
Again proof that the writer didn't put his all into the book, because the main plot isn't clear it could be A or b never got there and it's really an unfinished book,

Or the writer is holding out in order to write sequels.

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get this off my phone

Revisado: 01-08-23

new marketing suits and CEO have really screwed up audible...!
FOUR WORDS Remaining

DARN..! ONE

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Serial comics and lirup and mmoph are not books bu

Revisado: 12-22-22

just awful having the Amazon's computer force this stuff instead of books search function now shows us the latest in junk they want to sell. Audible is broken, worse than TV.

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Serial comics and lirup and mmoph are not books bu

Revisado: 12-22-22

just awful having the Amazon's computer force this stuff instead of books search function now shows us the latest in junk they want to sell. Audible is broken, worse than TV.

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Listen to baby talk.....I don't think so

Revisado: 12-22-22

so high pitched it hurt my ears...!

just so bad, sound engineer needed...!

I never wrote a review like this before... a warning of total junk...!

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I hate flipping contant chapter pages

Revisado: 10-29-22

I hate flipping contant chapter pages or hear pause and a loud chapter number every few minutes.
your not that good.

I hate flipping contant chapter pages

I hate flipping contant chapter pages

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Just good writing K I S S

Revisado: 10-23-22

lol Good cleanish fun
If the would was a fair No author gets to kill off a world with out a learner's permit. * see below

Great sound engineer 👍
A lot of your fans want you to keep the plot... together!
stop listing to the publicity department.

lol we want great dialog
The hardest thing to write - your doing it..!
good clean fun
avoid any weird violence.
R e s p e c t . . !
lol Midshipman or cyber security...
ice baby I. C. E.
- vs -
Hornblower. . .
did I say great sound...
lol...ya baby
Telly Salavas
KOJAK "Who loves ya baby" ;
yo dude killing off half the population of earth and evry single kid under 14 is just to F___ing dark
not as bad as our oil multinationals on this real earth
How many times have they roayly hurt us
leaded gass air polution stalling electric vechials and the plasytics industdy
earth has 4 fatal or near fatl blows there
okay take voyager the first episode was send so dark with needles in the heads of evry crew member.
the first couple of years wehere so dark.

and we don't need to gothere to have a story
check out hlf share that author knows space is a dangerous vilain allby it's self with out going to horro

I hate horro fiction
most of the time.

I like it better with humor , e.g. monster fighter

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