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Z. J. Shoemaker

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Interesting Premise That Falls A Bit Short

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
1 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-19-19

Without giving anything away, there is certainly an interesting premise at the heart of these two books, but it falls a bit short of being a fully developed story. The characters themselves are positioned to be interesting and dynamic, but often seem more like caricatures of a certain archetype, responding in predictable ways. The ending was interesting and with some work this could be much improved, but as it is there are moments that seem convenient, ill-conceived, or too simplistic. More fully developed characters and tightening up the plot would work wonders to enhance this story. It might get it some more meat, which it could use.

It was honestly difficult to get past the poor narration, as there wasn't much dynamism or differentiation between the various characters and the production quality itself was at times distracting, with many whistles and instance of lip-smacking occurring fairly frequently throughout the book.

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