Dallas Gordon

very little story

Revisado: 02-14-25

Far too many harem scenes and when you think the story is moving forward nope setting up a another harem scene. this should have been a slice of life about a e sports team. left highly disappointed. not the worst but surely a prime example of the lack of creativity in the harem genre.

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stuck in character building mode.

Revisado: 01-07-25

This book spent a lot of time reinforcing previously built character development. Not enough new ground was made in the story for a book of this length. still very enjoyable and well written will suggest for a lazy read.

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not bad

Revisado: 05-10-24

MC still seems to have a screw loose or the author gets off on nonstop struggle. stop talking about mana tresu8if the characters never care to look fo any.... like in the desks they keep coming from. get this man a magic backpack for loot.

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you forgot something

Revisado: 04-29-24

if your tired of writing Litrpg that's fine, just don't phone it in and mention levels every now and then for no good reason. just use the seed to write leveling and classes out of the story.

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amazing

Revisado: 05-07-23

This here is top shelf litrpg. I'll be listening to this masterful performance for years to come.

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Jason I still a turd

Revisado: 04-21-23

Jason seems to be broken for the sake of being broken. This plot device has more than run it's course and now it feels as if I'm watching someone attempt to teach a dog to fly a watermelon. but it's not all about Jason and the world building continues to impress where Character growth seems to as well except for the person who needs it the most.

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absolutely loved it

Revisado: 04-13-23

Nothing is perfect, especially to me with my advanced case of cynicism. But this book had me grinning like a loon non-stop 😁

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esto le resultó útil a 3 personas

very enjoyable but

Revisado: 03-08-23

The story of this book was highly enjoyable but I feel there should be mentioned that this is a spin-off of the original series and somewhat of a prequel. I see a lot of people are confused and wondering what's going on in the story and I didn't have that issue because I started off on the original source material ( either collapse)

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This is OP at its best.

Revisado: 02-09-23

if your looking for a co complicated and sophisticated main character You've come to the wrong place. The purpose of a OP character book isn't the main characters evolution it's evolution of the environment around the main character.

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esto le resultó útil a 2 personas

I am 100% satisfied

Revisado: 01-04-23

Rarely do I stumble across a series that does world buillding so well that I don't instantly go into a blind rage wishing the side characters would die so we can get back to the main story. I mean come on, nearly perfect pacing and time progression. It feels as if the main character was thrust into an active thriving world with millions of years of history and not just placed in front of paper thin back drops meant to feed the MC's ability to suck every ounce of potential from it's shallow grasp on scale and gravitas. Plus the icing on the cake, Zack no longer complains about the multiverse like a petulant child that has the super power to point out all of its flaws while offering not a one solution. No he's living with the cards he was dealt, recognizing the advantages he's gained, striving to do what he can for those he cares for while embracing his responsibilities (Growth/development). Yes I am very satisfied with my journey so far with Defiance of the Fall

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