Denard

please stop the kidnapping stick

Revisado: 02-10-25

this is your fifth book and you've done the kidnapping thing in three out of the five bucks it was already old. we did in the first book. your story is decent, but honestly I don't think I can stomach another book with kidnapping again. please find something else to move your story along. this is getting old. it's already old other than that, there are a few other things you did figure kind of not the best. there are many ways you could have moved the story forward, but the story itself was enjoyable minus the kidnapping and the actions taken towards the end also could have been better. but on a whole other than those two things, I enjoyed the The majority of the story.

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not a bad story

Revisado: 12-24-24

Not a bad story it's not the best I've ever heard but it's not the worst either definitely worth a credit but not worth $35 if you get this book I can definitely say the best thing about it is even though the intro makes it seem like this entire book takes place in a dungeon good news there's more to this book than that Also my biggest gripe is the book isn't long enough I wish there was more definitely looking forward to getting Book two I feel like the real meat of this story Will start in book two which is why my gripe is this book wasn't long enough

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I bought and paid for book 1 with the narration of Travis baldree

Revisado: 08-02-24

why is there the narrated book 1 that I paid for by Travis baldree deleted and replaced with a narrated version I did not buy, it's perfectly cool for you to have two of same books made by different narrators, but it's F up for you to delete the one I paid for and replace it with one I did not I didn't ask you to change what I did buy to a different voice Ithat I didn't buy / want, I loved the one made by Travis baldree and very much wanted to keep it!! I'm one staring this book because it's not what I paid for you deleted the one I paid for and replaced it with s*** I didn't ask for!!!!! 😡

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this book is not as big as the one before

Revisado: 05-18-24

the narrator was perfect but the story was missing what the first one had, the first book felt like 3 to 4 books combined it was awesome I loved it this one does none of that it stays in one place in the entire book he never moves it's kind of a stagnant story a lot happens but at the same time not much I know it doesn't make sense but that's the best way I can think to put it without spoiling anything it's not a bad book it's just not book one by a huge margin. if you go in knowing this you will still enjoy the story for what it is. I hope book 3 brings back the greatness that book one had I love the idea of multiple adventures happening in one book.

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least enjoyable book in the series so far

Revisado: 05-15-24

this was more of a soap opera of a book, everything was messy in terms of drama and a whole lot of tension even when the fighting happened it was just tension no actual moments of enjoyment or epic fights really happened in terms of the feeling of this book Rob still did some Rob moments but it was a whole lot of drama I can't say I enjoyed this book wayyyy too much drama, literally the drama never stopped throughout the entire book I like the RPGs to have action we can have some drama but I didn't want a drama novel which is entirely what this book was it was a drama novel titled under litRPG it's not a bad book, but it wasn't an enjoyable one for me, I had moments of laughter but no moments of absolute enjoyment like I had with the others.

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all the people complaining about narration left some information out

Revisado: 03-24-24

first off the narration of switching between the guy and the girl voices is present the female cast only narrates when it's through the perspective of a female and Travis Bradley only narrates when it's through the perspective of a male which is very important for you to know so the narration isn't as bad as everyone else's making it sound yes it's true that Travis Bradley doesn't narrate all the voices when it's the girl's time she narrates all the voices but it's still a really well thought out direction of doing it because it follows the flow that has been done throughout all the other times in the story it's just Travis isn't the one doing the perspective of the females anymore when it shifts to being through the perspective of a female and the female is the one telling the story of what's happening to her or what she's experiencing does it throw you a little bit yes but it's not as bad as everyone else was making it look I thought this book was going to suck because of how bad the reviews were and because I came with such low expectations I can actually say that I very much thoroughly enjoyed this book more so that I have his stories in a long time I like this one more than I did the past two books. what I'm saying is give this one a chance and ignore the reviews, don't ignore them completely but just know they made it worse than it really was.

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loved it!

Revisado: 01-03-24

loved it! can't wait for the final book in the series to release!! can't wait to see how he became so powerful

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book turns into a horror movie once 10 hours are left

Revisado: 12-07-23

book turns into a horror movie once 10 hours are left, with all the stupid decisions kinks included, don't listen to book at night, it may give you nightmares 😉, but on a whole I enjoyed the story. but story is in a weird genre of horror litrpg, not sure if there are any other books in this same place or if this book is one of a kind.

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it was a great story but

Revisado: 11-18-23

it was a great story but the writer had a small habit of skipping ahead in places that he didn't see as "important", and for the overall scheme of the story they weren't, but it would have been enjoyable to get to be there while it played out, and instead he would skip past it & tell you what happened, when I would prefer to have been shown in those instances. while he didn't do it constantly or often it happened a few times and in all honesty I would have loved to have gotten to experience those moments. But for the most part the entire story was very enjoyable and held my interest the whole time I just would have liked a longer book by him not skipping spots and actually playing out what happened in those places.

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this book was the weakest of the lot

Revisado: 10-20-23

main character becomes afraid to fight / hesitant to do so because he's afraid of killing creatures that are higher levels then him and power leveling himself by doing so, on top of that when he does fight he can't kill anything he's made from being the most powerful thing in the book to the weakest for no reason he's just walking tank now and I can't kill nothing top of that the story didn't even really focus on him and focus on everyone else around them and how cool and great their stuff was and his party members and focused on setting up the story for the next book instead of focusing on this book like it should have it was focused on setting up things for the next one in the series and since the last book did the same thing I'm starting to really lose interest in this series not even looking forward to the next one now can't say for sure if I'm even going to spend money on it. it's more enjoyable if the book you're on is enjoyable and not having to look forward to the next book that you have to buy for Hope of an enjoyable book.

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