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Terrible Writing

Revisado: 04-21-25

In this story, the author initially pretends to forget the plot, all to make it more dramatic. The female protagonists are poorly done and are quite obnoxious. Even though there are way worse fantasy novels out there. This story just turned to steaming fecal matter.

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Action packed story

Revisado: 04-19-25

This book has it's pros and cons. Decent action and reasonably paced storytelling. There are a few parts that are quite absurd. Spoiler Alert** using a weapon in a unarmed fight is quite a dishonorable thing with the consequences of death not being promoted. When the weak man of a author thanks his wife for proofreading. That explains most of the absurd parts. Just ignore it.

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idealogy overload

Revisado: 10-31-24

came to learn about meditation. Instead, you get lectured for hours with pseudo-factual, over opinionated bull feces. stay on meditation.

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Seth Ring is a raging simple simp

Revisado: 08-17-24

The fights are becoming so bland and uninspiring. "locking up my emotions". Let's talk about my feelings. Dude you suck. Maybe you need to stick with corny romance novels.

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Pretty Stupid Story

Revisado: 04-01-24

This character and the titan blacksmith, that the author has created have many similarities. The stories surrounding them are also similar. They are both ridiculously overpowered by even the fantasy world's standards. This moron nerfs himself and the rest of the book is about him dealing with it. He has several MAJOR threats that he is waiting to present themselves. I doubt the author can successfully dig himself out of this self inflicted hole. stupid and frustrating

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For young naive children only

Revisado: 10-15-23

The story had potential. The author completely fumbles it with hours of cringe drawn out dialog and obvious intentions to handicap the main character who had been giving several tools to overcome his short comings. The story is frustratingly slow and drawn out. No real orogress by the character by the end of story to improve himself. More ideological metro male being dominated by females horse crap.

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Not that good.

Revisado: 09-04-23

The coddling and boring “action scenes” killed it for me. The MC level from 0 to OP hero in a short about of time. Then Everyone starts getting unique classes. Then take note of the childish, condescending, micro parenting dialog and I want to throw this story in the trash. Books like this are killing this genre.

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Annoying Stupid Dialog, chore to listen

Revisado: 09-02-23

This story is poorly thought out and geared for children. The characters dialogue is unnecessary and frustrating. The magic system is base and poorly done. Why am I the first to make a REAL review of this garbage?

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Endless coddling, feelings, fake harem, Boring

Revisado: 08-22-23

I am done with this series. The male authors these days are soft and feminine as hell. Still has the issues of the endless stats and upgrade reading. Making a settlement is not that tedious. More silly drama than action. Favorite spoken question, “ are you sure?” Cut through the feelings and trauma crap to move this story along. What the hell? Really?

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Don’t be fooled by fake reviews

Revisado: 08-19-23

If you didn’t notice, a family member of the author posted a five star review. I suspect more false reviews given the abundance of one and two star ratings yet the average rating doesn’t decrease. This story is maddening frustrating. First enduring the graphic and totally unnecessary torture sections. I think this shows a mental sickness of the author. It is never explained why the villains are going to these measures while they try to bolster their forces against a future threat. The possible MC is frustrating stupid, weak, childish. Why the author chose to do this with a possibly over powered character is poor writing to me. I don’t understand how anyone could think that such a character is interesting. I had to strain to reign in my anger listening to this garbage. The author seems to be a pompous moron with some sick fantasies. Don’t waste your credits on this. You have been warned.

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