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Mr. Apollos, please just finish Underworld

Revisado: 08-29-24

Mr. Apollos Thorne, a gifted writer has endeavored to craft a series of books about eastern Asian cultivation. Rich in culture but seriously … why?

1. This series comes across as a Korean drama with so much fatiguing dialogue focused on the minutia of every action and how it makes every other character feel. It feels to the listener like a grind just to get through those sections. Have to skip because it will put you to sleep fast. However, the faithful relationship between the husband and wife is a great point that is endearing and appreciated. It doesn’t go unnoticed.

2. The make and female narrators are both talented but the female speaker, Ms. Kay, failed to remove her breath sounds during the audio editing.

The result is a very distracting listen as she deeply inhales between each sentence. It is to the point that once you notice her breath sounds, it becomes very distracting and you stop paying attention to the content of the story. 10 minutes of narration will pass and all you can focus on is her deep inhalation noises. Unfortunate and not in line with a professional production. The male narrator knocked it put of the park. Excellent work.

3. The most important point is a request. Mr. Apollos, you have a large audience who is waiting for you to complete your highly successful Underworld project. Why have you stopped writing that epic story which had just reached an incredible point, coming into its full maturity? Please go and finish the Underworld series. It is your finest work.

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Yeah it’s good!

Revisado: 01-20-24

All the best elements of a solid “system” novel with an underdog MC who progresses, but without profanity or a woke political agenda. It’s well written and performed with excellence by Travis Baldree.

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Yikes! - perverse

Revisado: 01-15-24

The authors are 2 grown men, writing about hypersexualized TEENAGERS who are involved in homosexual and bisexual activities. Trying to be funny and have the teenage characters discussing “man meat” in chapter 1. It’s perverse and inappropriate. Why are 2 grown men writing content like this? Yikes

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It’s boring

Revisado: 12-31-23

Dreary, dark and slow. It feels like a never ending sci fi detective movie from the 80’s. The random entrance of an ancient Aztec “god” At the final moments leaves the reader in whiplash. It’s lame. It’s just bad.

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Completed the first book

Revisado: 12-12-23

1. Why so short? This book should clearly be combined with book 1 as a single book.

2. The author seems to forget all the loot the MC puts into his bag of holding. Remember the unique sword and shield from the beginning of book 1? Forgotten. All the magic books and scrolls he gained from the wizard he saved and the successful revenge quest at the island castle? Never followed through.

3. After only a couple weeks together, Cleave makes the MC his heir and “son”? The MC instantly embraces this new relationship and starts calling a guy from a game “Dad?” Seems kinda off and feels very awkward to the reader/listener.

Other than that bit of critical feedback, really enjoying this series!

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Enjoyed this one!

Revisado: 12-10-23

This has the light, funny and intelligent sarcasm of Dave Rubin. It’s good! The narrator even speaks in the same pacing and style of Dave Rubin.

Thoughtfully balanced character growth as he struggles to resolve his past and discovers his way in his new life. Plenty of mystery and adventure left to explore in this new world! Thoroughly enjoyable!

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Oh boy … not good.

Revisado: 12-04-23

This book was like a 1990’s episode of the Power Rangers where a group of shallow characters face cartoonish monsters and you are left feeling empty after the experience.

When the MC is weak at the beginning - everyone hates him. When the MC gets overpowered later in the story arc - everyone hates him. He is also a sociopath. Yikes. That's not healthy.

Please do not waste your time, credit or money on this poor book.

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Thank you

Revisado: 09-24-23

Thank you for an amazing story. Well crafted story and beautifully narrated. The world would like more from this team!

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SLOW ... buy this if you like watching PAINT DRY

Revisado: 09-23-23

After the epic, nicely paced and tense journey of Nolyn, what a disappointment to see it all come to a screeching halt with this steaming pile of pointless meandering from the mind of a talented author who wasted this opportunity. Tim Gerald Reynolds has talent, but this lame story was sadly DOA.

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Ruined it...

Revisado: 09-14-23

Average author who added immature and unnecessary graphic sex content. Why destroy a good idea with offensive content that adds exactly nothing to your work? I will not be purchasing any future works by David Gemmell.

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