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Great for the first 10 hours

Revisado: 01-06-25

Like the title says, this was great for the first 10 hours. Then the writer deletes the protag's well thought-out motivation and replaces it with a lazy "Well, your this deep in anyway. Might as well continue." and tries to cover up the sudden drop with a rushed romance.
A shame, the story had such great potential.

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Great Sequel, Except the forced romance subplot

Revisado: 04-12-24

Amazing continuation with Sam's religion getting bigger and more organized while Sam starts creation her own holy servants.
Now thats all I would say on the good part as it is best to read it (or listen in this case).
But I will spoil the worst part:
The Forced love plot between Sammy (The Goddess) and Azure (The Ex sex-slave that was very recently saved by Sammy and who is also a devot presitest of Sammy's religion). to sum it up, It's incredibly artificial and unbalanced and it doesn't help that Sammy herself spends most of the book aware that something (very blatantly the author) is forcing this romance.
For some reason the author doesn't see the problem in forcing two characters with absolutely no chemistry (One of which was a sex slave who just left a extremely unbalanced relationship) into a extremely unbalanced relationship. It feels like a evil villain plot in a way, like we're going to find out some evil god/goddess of love was forcing this for some reason, but no. The author just wanted this to happen so it's happening regardless of how consentless it is.

But as long as you can survive that clusterf**k, It's still an amazing read.

I do wish this romatic fuckup gets retconed and Sam goes back to being Ace, or starts a romance with anyone of the other characters she actually has chemistry with (Like Redberry).

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Recommend skipping this volume

Revisado: 05-02-23

What happens when you add a TTRPG reference in your book without knowing how they work. Usually a bad joke you would find in Big Bang Theory. But when reference is part of and important to the plot, man did the last four chapter leave a bad taste in my mouth. Just spend the last few hours pissed off because Fehu Kazuno clearly doesn't know what a DM does and how they work.
I went from eagerly waiting for the other players to show up to fearing if Fehu fucks up again.
Put simply, this Volume is in desperate need of a rewrite AFTER Fehu Kazuno learns what a DM really is. Until then, Highly recommend skipping this one.
You should never make the plot advance with a "because I said so" reasoning, ESPECIALLY in the most literal sense.

Here to hoping number 5 does better, cz we all know you can Fehu Kazuno,

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