Adam

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Revisado: 09-06-23

I am forced to write something now that is, at the least, 15 words long.

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The ending is so bad I won't be continuing the ser

Revisado: 08-25-23

Think "cheap, cliche writing dodge".

Do you like ANY of the characters? Don't buy the book.

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Thankfully there wasn't a Dog involved. What the writer has done is literally referred to as " killing the dog" a cheap easy way to build Pathos.

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He kills every character at the very end to setup a cheap meaningless revenge plot. There is no real reason and almost no buildup. It must have taken all the skill of a middle schooler to come up with this drek.

Also 3/4 of the way thru the main character has a huge amount of money. The writer decides he doesn't have enough angst so he just mugs him in a pointless little scene. All gains lost to no improvement of the plot.

Its too bad, it was a good book otherwise. its almost like someone else took over writing in a couple of places.

Its more Sad than anything else really.

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Why do I have to put a headline?

Revisado: 06-29-23

I want to review this book but I do not want to actually write anything.

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Awesome as always.

Revisado: 04-22-22

We need more Noob! This one took longer than the 6 months between the others. I'm going to have to assume Ryan nodded off to sleep at some point.

Stop that! Sleep is for the weak! More books! Mush! Yah! Move 'em out! Giddy up er ... writer dude? I kinda lost track of what I was doing there. Still more books needed.

May I suggest gnomes? Nice, violently vicious, puntable gnomes? Don't let the cuteness fool you, those Lawn Ornaments are up to something monstrous. Evil even. Well, ok, mildly evil. Not like the capital E, pure concentrated stuff. Too expensive to use that on gnomes. Gotta think of the budget.

Yep, I've gone completely off point in my own review. Still more books! More! More!

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Good LITRPG

Revisado: 05-08-21

Nor the best, but since neither Author was Russian or Aleron Kong I'm calling it a Push.

Think about it, if you are about to submerge yourself into a character who would you want to be: the everyday average guy/gal? Or the insanely lucky bastard who rocks a world to its knees?

Me?! I'd be the safe average guy. But I'd dream I was the ultra badass, whose success made themselves miserable. But I'd blow past the Suck parts. And really love the free XP!!!

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very enjoyable

Revisado: 07-08-20

I could listen to Eric and rugrats arguments all day
can't wait to start the next book

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interesting take on a popular idea 💡

Revisado: 05-03-20

I found this to be a very engaging from the start, the characters are relatable and there development
was really well done the ending did leave me wanting to know more but I'm sure that was the point, I look forward to the next book asap

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It's Romance Novel Grade Porn, people

Revisado: 03-26-19

It's dressed up nicely, and it's well hidden ... but it's lite S&M
porn. If you like the Anita Blake vampire series after about book 5, then it's your kind of lite S&M Porn. But it's still porn, with a Masochist as the Main Character. He likes to be hurt, he Demands to be hurt, it was Very insistent and graphically descriptive on this point.

I've returned two books out of literally a thousand and this was the second.

If you like it, fine. But don't try and pretend it's not a Romance novel level of porn.

Enjoy, you do you.

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The Narration, oh Gods The Narration

Revisado: 11-08-18

First time I've ever reviewed a book here. Its a great concept, real daydream fodder. It's very technical and I'll admit I'm a fan of that. The story is good. Light on dialog and character building but you can't have everything.

HOWEVER, The narrator. I'm not capitalizing the word for a reason. To paraphrase Dave Lister:
-If there was such a thing as the Stultification Olympics that man could Bore for his Nations Glory.-

He'd get nothing but Gold Medals all the way. I'd use him as a drill to Bore thru mountain passes but its illegal to use a weapon of Mass Destruction that way. He could make a Junior High school teacher sound interesting on a beautiful April day. His voice is a natural Anesthetic ... Do not listen to this in your car, you'll wake up in the wrong lane. He's weaponized Ennui.

So good book, but the narrator needs an Adrenaline drip and a stern lecture on what the word -Monotone- means.

I realize the narrator is a relative of the Author. And I want to put emphasis on the fact that I couldn't narrate a book if someone put a gun to my head. There'd be far to much weeping and screaming involved. But we have professional narrators for a reason. Intonation and mood are vital to narration. Just my opinion. Mahalo

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next book now please

Revisado: 09-08-18

this is the best set of books I have ever read I love the idea and every time I think I like him I hope he lives....... or not lol but I never see it coming can't wait for the next one

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