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Anna

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YA writing style with adult content

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-20-25

Some great action scenes and twists that would probably excel as tv series, not a book.
YA writing style with adult content. By “YA,” I mean the characters are thin and lacking detail, taking on predictable roles. Not even the protagonist has much meat to her, though I have enjoyed the tension arc between her human vulnerability and deeper power.

It’s certainly not bad, but the writing style doesn’t improve. Redundant at times. Endless first-person overthinking all the thoughts, so many repetitive thoughts, have I mentioned that the same thing repeats over and over in her head and then we write about it every. Single. Time. As if it’s the first time?

I wanted to like it, I’ll probably finish the series just because I’ve invested this much time in it. But honestly I should have trusted my gut from the first book. I’ll check back with what this author writes in another 10/20 years- I look forward to seeing how her writing matures.

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Toddlers & Bullies

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1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-24-24

Well. Picked this up after sincerely enjoying the Darkmore Penitentiary series.
I truly find it hard to believe it’s written by the same authors. But I get the feeling someone decided ahead of time what these characters were going to be, and refused to flex with what the story nuance was asking for. The end result is an awkward, unbelievable cast of characters that toddle between the stone columns of alpha types, BDSM, and straight up bullying. I couldn’t finish it.

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Perfect listen for my 7 yr old boy

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-09-24

Had my 7 year old doing real belly laughs. As soon as it was done he said “mom, let’s listen to it again!”

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