Will K.

Why is Orrin such a b*tch

Revisado: 08-28-24

exactly what the title says. he kinda just sucks, and acts like the intelligent one even though Daniel was always better at school

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Honestly, Fantastic

Revisado: 06-08-24

I rarely relisten to stories, but this one will definitely be in my regular rotation. Fantastic story, would highly recommend.

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Solid Slice of Life

Revisado: 03-23-24

Slice of life portion was good, the system was meh and side characters slowly became less of what they once were. The side character's romance was not good, they seemed to have no compatability and was just kinda shoehorned into it. Overall an enjoyable listen though, I'll likely read the next.

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Meh MC's Good World

Revisado: 01-07-24

MC constantly complains about racism while also being unwilling to admit her own actions explain why people get scared when they see her. She's also constantly rascist to anyone that isn't a 'unpopular race' and even then she is to some of them; "oh crap it's a human, I'm going to assume this is how they see me and I don't like elves." It's very hard to support a hypocrite no matter how good the world is

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Better Than Most!

Revisado: 12-19-23

Everyone that says "is not really speed running" has never read a cultivation story. Dude flys through the levels and the entire book covers only a few weeks of time. The prelude gives a fantastic time scale and he's on a solid track right from the beginning. Only thing I wish was different was him caring for his sister a bit more, though it makes sense why he wouldn't, I really like her character and I hope he develops a similar care.

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Excellent as Always

Revisado: 11-13-23

Exactly what you'd expect. Quality continues, and I still love the characters. Jeff kills it!

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Excellent as Always

Revisado: 11-13-23

Exactly what you'd expect. Quality continues, and I still love the characters. Jeff kills it!

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Continued Quality

Revisado: 11-10-23

Same great story, maybe a bit more preachy/over explaining, but it's a good story.

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Few Bad Things Cause Steep Decline

Revisado: 11-05-23

The last 1.5 hours were completely subpar, but the issues go deeper than that. The characters feel flat and their primary motivations feel hollow. Author felt the need to shoehorn relationships that didn't really work or feel earned.

The relationship between Ryan and Troy is especially bad. It manages to remove all personality from both characters: going from driven, capable, well-written/well meaning characters with individual drives to 'we can't dedicate time to training, we need to boink (insert implied s*x joke)' every single time.

Seriously, I can count on a single hand the dialog that either character has that's not answering for both. I can count on 2 hands the total dialog lines of both characters. It really seemed like the author got tired of writing them and figured this was an okay compromise.

Lucas is less decisive in everything. He especially turns into an idiot where Rose is concerned (and the last 1.5 hours).

Class upgrades are cool. I wish more was done with this. Very little actually mattered. Only 1 of Lucas' mattered and it somehow turned him evil, no indication that classes control you personally prior. The rules are repeatedly broken.

"Omen can't enforce his will onto the world too often because it's terribly taxing" - one sec let him finish his machine gun fire of instant death, this is totally within the known rules. And - "Oh everyone is dying, I'm glad the only person to lose anything in class advancement is me. I don't need revive, sure let me keep all other abilities of the old class except the major one on my path itself"

Writing style itself is still good. So many cool ideas are brought up here that I hope to continue the series. I just hope he fixes the obvious flaws. Needless deaths also don't add anything, the characters are so 2d that I felt very little if what was supposed to be high impact (the cause is needless, nothing changes either way)

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It's alright

Revisado: 09-03-23

Despite its faults, it is far better than The Land, I'll probably pick up the next book.


Well writtwn system characters are likable, and the universe mostly functions in stable rules.

The worst part about the book is the author. The battles are written well, and the skills are consistent, but the author decided to throw in some last-minute "I'm so much smarter than all these losers, why weren't they doing this all along" stuff and pedo flirting between an actual child (the author specifically notes that they are a child multiple times) and a woman old enough to have successfully retired and purchased land (likely old enough to be her grandmother, no indication she's from a long lived race, but the child certainly is).

Unnecessary character development can be worse than none ("I love peace but a little genocide never hurt anyone right"), especially when it goes against the small vestiges that were already laid down or is just last minute decided by an author that doesn't care enough to go back and change the story to make sense.

Overall, it's a decent story despite the flaws. I would recommend it.

p.s. You don't milk bulls. Male "cows" may have something you can tug, and you may get something white and thick, but it is NOT milk. The main character is a minotaur! No wonder all the cows disliked him

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