Angelina

Severely ill with 2nd book syndrome.

Revisado: 07-23-22

So I really loved the 1st book. I could not put it down. Unfortunately this book did not live up to it. The Story suffered from plot and storyline problems. You know when you're playing superheroes and villains with your brother and no matter what superpower you throw at him he remains unbeatable. Until he finally states that he is invincible to everything. That pretty much sums up the plot. There are so many holes in the storyline and plot. The author solution to this is simply to create many many many exceptions to her magical world and system. It's almost like she wrote the 1st book without considering what the 2nd book would consist of . If you like books full of fluff, filler, mindless content and romance this might be the book for you.

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14 year olds creative writing project?

Revisado: 07-16-22

So, I have over 500 books in my library, some of which deserved a one star. However I've never taken the time to write a review tell now. This book was that bad. It was literally like listening to a 14 year olds creative writing project. Has to be self published. Absolutely no editing. Horrible grammar. For example in 12 consecutive sentences, the author uses the word lost 10 times. Almost once a sentence.The author just rambles facts off about the characters. Absolutely no use of word building. Maybe a 7th to 8th grade grasp of vocabulary. Has to be someone's passion project., so they can tell their friends they're published author.

To top it off the narration sounds like she was asked to read aloud in class. Certainly not a professional narrator. Leaves me wondering if the author talked her best friend into doing the audio?

By far the worst book I have ever listened to. Grateful that audible has a return policy.

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