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Needs longer breaks between scenes

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-06-25

Great story, world building and narration.

But they need to put longer breaks between scenes. Especially with the heavy use of flashbacks and flash forwards. A scene would end and immediately run into the next scene without a break, making it confusing and hard to follow.

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