Cody

Sorry but I hate it.

Revisado: 08-21-22

Sorry author, but I hate your book. The system isn't interesting, the main characters are annoying, & the humor isn't funny.

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Great Story... but

Revisado: 07-13-21

The narrator can not do a variety of realistic voices. As for the writing I don't think it portrayed the correct depth of rage for the audience to feel it; when the protagonist angry I want to feel empathetic anger, that's the sign of great storytelling.

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It's not what I wanted.

Revisado: 06-03-20

Calling it a Dungeon Core book is misleading. A Dungeon core is expected to summon monsters & build mazes to kill intruders, this has none of that.

Their are Far to many acronyms, it might not of been a problem in writing but in an audio book... well let's call it overwhelming.

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My 2 cents

Revisado: 04-24-20

You need to make the stats feel more optional like you did in your other books.
The cursed fairy is a cool concept & so is the fairy in a dungeon core but those two feel like they should of been two different story's; a fairy concerning her bad luck and using it to assist her dungeon core.

Dont be down because of this comment, your other books are great.

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Honorable narration.

Revisado: 02-24-20

This series is so good, please have your books re narrated. In fact you deserve a cast of narrators

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Bad Nararating & Editing, but still a Good Book

Revisado: 02-20-20

The narrator breaths to mutch and at one point he blows into the microphone, he occasional coughs and at one point says cough cough and I have no idea why he misspeaks and says it again all for the listeners to hear.

All that being said I love incubi and "evil" books like this. Finding a good incubus book is pretty rare. I like how he treats his slaves and the way he dealt with that woman under the table was so unexpected for multiple reasons and I loved it. Keep up the good work and fire that narrator.

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It had so much potential

Revisado: 01-22-20

The chains. Ok, I can understand you wanting to make it an "oh it was a simulation all along"(or somthing) type of thing, but it was so confusing, Its a simulation with souls and a person who lived on fake earth had a soul from an unknown place and was... yah no that's already to complicated no thank you.

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A fun book for the black hearted.

Revisado: 11-03-19

I love it but I'd never share this with my friends or family because polite society whould shame me. Shrugs thats how it is. I love just how extreamly natural and casual the murder and objectification is. It sort of made me think about morality in a new way, Also it's strang how there are similer elemets to my own imagination; a shapeshifter, pheromone manipulation, an embodiment of greed and gluttony. Overall I love this searies and I want mutch more of it.

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A great book. I want a 2nd.

Revisado: 10-05-19

This is a pretty good book, its creative with both literal and metaphorical world building. I like queeny even if I don't like her name. I like how queeny acts like a loyal religious girl who worships a human, I like seeing how the MC handles her feelings for him. I also like how she applies ant logic to it as well.

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More please.

Revisado: 09-27-19

I like this story. The fear of squirrels is funny. one thing that could be improved is reminding us of people's height.

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