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Good 1st book better sequel

Revisado: 03-13-24

The first book is good. It's well written, and same amazing performance but ultimately fell short. The main character was just punched down, never improving in any way. The new installment follows through on foreshadowed elements, starts setting goals, more world-building, and much better secondary characters. I know it's a cliche opinion, but the characters were amazing. I did like how the first book was brutal, to build Truth up, however it is hard to just read through all of that without letting up at all. It was necessary but depressing. So good job author.

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Much better than the first

Revisado: 01-28-24

More character development. I like how the direction the MC is moving towards. Marv still gets a lot of shit but in this one, he gets exactly what he deserves for the reasons he deserves it. The first book seemed to punish him for good decisions and not his bad ones. So far so good

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Good cultivation story

Revisado: 01-26-24

Needs more explanation on how their magic system works. Liked the overall story, but Marv feels a bit contradictory

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Great series

Revisado: 11-03-23

Great world-building and writing. Does slow down a lot after the first book. Probably one of the only series where I liked the first book the most. The characters are all well-rounded and have more depth than expected. Did a very good job with Demis especially. Making her borderline unlikable and then allowing MC and her to grow closer was very natural and endearing. The same happened with Inferna and it wasn't as satisfying, but still interesting. Overall it's a great series.

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Pretty good

Revisado: 11-03-23

I like the whole story overall. There are a few things I dislike regarding the romance subplot. Almost all of it gets overly complicated and I can't say I hate it but it's not great. The meta-narrative portion of the story is incredible though. Never thought I'd enjoy that sort of narrative but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sadly it does get pushed aside I disliked it later on.

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Very well executed

Revisado: 11-02-23

Has many flaws I usually dislike in other works. I can't quite pinpoint why it doesn't seem like flaws in this work so I'll chop it all up to world-building and excellent execution. For example, the main character avoids head-on combat. Normally this is something I find annoying because it feels like the writer desperately wants to portray their character a certain way, despite how unreasonable it makes them. The reason it works here is because it created a reason to avoid combat while setting up a scenario where that outlook changes (reinforced by the combat-oriented setting, the obvious uses for MC's ability, and the pressure from acquaintances to move in that direction). Because of that and the good writing I can't help but be hooked. Seriously don't stop writing.

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NTR

Revisado: 10-26-23

Good story didn't like the NTR subplot. Wasn't necessary for multiple reasons in the narrative.

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