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Interesting concept - poor dialogue

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-09-23

Unfortunately not very believable characters - some dialogue works but then something super cringy will be said that just doesn't fit someone of that age. Even the adult dialogue is a bit strange, and so it distracts from what would otherwise be a fairly interesting concept

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Great Hook

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-22-20

Love the hook, well researched well quoted. Mixing fact with fiction made it feel believable and grounded. However, after the hook was set, it drifts into standard military sci-fi - could be a recipe for wash and repeat - but there are infinite possibilities, so who knows! Excited to see where this story goes!

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