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story of self agrandizing and glory days

Revisado: 10-14-24

The entirity of this story besides the few actual plot points is one self agrandizing story of what the mc was, what he did, or what the organization he was connected too did and how everyone else is weak. Its a shame as there is an actual storyline in there that can be good but is overshadowed by the poor filler. The Narration was fine but suffers from the narrator drawing out the end of sentences giving it an insufferable tone and after 3hrs became unbearable. Overall i like the premise and the structure for powers/abilities but the editor should have told the author to let this one cook for a bit and flesh it out into something that could have been good.

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sideswiped

Revisado: 08-14-24

i was liking the story well until i got sideswiped by the gay romance of the MC. Aint my cup of tea and wasnt expecting it. I wouldve appreciated a heads up in book 1 if this was gonna be more of a focus

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Inane Descisions and Repitition

Revisado: 06-17-24

What i lovemost of a story is to here a lil peptalk spiel about how they (two characters) should go do something cross a metaphorical sometimes literal bridge then have the exact same conversation again with the same boring logic like FFS get on with it. In addition the MC keeps calling his essence Luck when its was specifically addressed in the first book that it wasnt just luck, that it was kharmic Luck with friendly neighborhood debt collector sprinkled in there. It makes more sense when you realize the author is pumping out more books than a harem fiction author in heat so the quality just aint gonna be there but its decent junk food. For the narration there are some stories that could use this guy but not a story with young adults as the MCs. Everyone sounds like they smoke 12 packs a day and every sentance has a strange lilting tone at the end of it as if its all a grand mystery, it aint

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Wtf was the author thinking

Revisado: 10-09-23

idk what the author was thinking but the complete lack of treetrees humanity ruined the story the constant dumb questions, amoral outlook, uneccesary problems created from a lack of proper social interaction, and a complete refusal to inform others he is from earth ruins 99% of the book. I listened to the first in the series because the tree still had some relateable characteristics in this book he doesnt.

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The filler Episode if it was a manga

Revisado: 09-15-22

filler book with no satisfactory story progression. it carries on the same tropes as the past 3 books without any meaningful character progression/development or insights. Its a nice filler dont get me wrong but it is a filler which i can see with his nect book scheduled to release in 3 months.

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