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Kira Hansen

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Confusing, Incomplete, and Under Edited but Promising... maybe?

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-14-20

The storyline of the series was confusing with the world lightly hinted at and barely explained. I kept looking for a fan site to help me understand what was happening. The individual nations and races are unique and hold a good appeal. I wouldn’t mind making a DnD game with them. The creation narrative of the world/apocalypse generator idea or at least the direction that I hope it goes also seem interesting. The characters have an obvious motivation and are complex, which is good. However, that being said this is not a complete trilogy it ends on a cliff-hanger with very little clarified. Few to none of the character arcs are complete and it seems obvious to me that more books should be included. I am not the most highly aware of grammar or structure but even I was off put by some issues that could have used a good edit. Additionally I think some of the confusion might come from consistency errors?
Tim did a great job for the most part but the audio editing was super obvious in a number of places. Paragraphs were very obvious recorded at different times with different emotions/ weights. The characters didn’t necessary have a very different feel/ voice which didn’t help the confusion of the writing when plot lines started to come together with all ~10 characters in every changing groupings.

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Meaningful Parallels to Today

Total
5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-04-16

The book was great, with meaningful topics that extend into today's world. The only thing that was slightly off was the male voices in the performance (it made me laugh). The book however was thought provoking. A great book if you like anti-utopian literature with character development and fantasy elements.

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