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Dr. G

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Whiplash

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 04-21-25

Their relationship gave me whiplash. I really just wanted to throttle them. But it wasn't just the main characters. It was like her parents and best friend were also double minded.

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Dear Author

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 02-11-25

The beginning of the book didn't match the end. It was undeveloped. Your narrators are tolerable at 3.5 times fast. Maybe use someone else for your next book.

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Ick Factor

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-18-25

I wanted to love this book however, the amount of times the said something with my step brother or my step sister. Yes, we know. If you drank a shot every time they said it you'd be lucky to be alive.

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Dear Author

Total
1 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
4 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-11-25

Your main female character is awful. She is stubborn and pushing her anger against her mate. DNF'ED. Returning

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My first 5 Star of 2025

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-07-25

Dear Author

I absolutely love that he is on the spectrum but you never said it until the end. Beautiful story. Beautifully written. Thank you for writing an amazing book.

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Dear Author

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-03-25

You successfully worked a main female character that I can't stand. I'm 50% through this book and I could care less how it ends. She lies and lies and lies foe absolutely no reason. No emotional connection. No chemistry. The nest thing about this book is Sebastian York.

Dear Potential reader-Pass on this one. DNF'ed half the way through. Returning.

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Dear Author

Total
2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-01-25

First, chapter one is full of edits that were not deleted.
Second, your narration is horrible. Female voice is dry. Male voice sounds slimy and less volume.
Lastly, the dialog is poorly written.
Overall returning book undeveloped, not edited properly and DNF'ed at chapter 40. At this point I don't care how it ends I'm not emotionally connected and neither were the relationships of the characters. Too much emphasis on the sexualy relationships and nothing else. Don't waste your time on this book. It needs a rewrite and good beta readers.

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Dear Author

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-30-24

Give me more. You built it up. You had me invested just to prematurely end the book. Everything was great just to hit a The End brick wall. So much you could have done.

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Just Okay

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3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-09-24

Wanted more depth, emotional connection. Felt short. Just a basic feel good but honestly could have stopped half way through and not cared how it ended. No emotional investment.

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Dear Author

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
3 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 12-05-24

At the very end I feel like you missed a golden opportunity to really wrap up this book. There's no way they were alone on adoption day. Both of their chosen family members would have been there too. This best friend/brother and her best friend/sister. Additionally the areas she got upset with him and the moments her parents didn't show up with their love you didn't make me feel it. I wanted it to hurt so bad I felt it like she did. You only skimmed the surface. If you make those few edits this could be a 5 star read.

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