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Not what I was expecting

Revisado: 02-06-24

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People trapped in a game.. great idea, I’m in. The MC has ZERO knowledge of games in a timeframe of intergalactic travel.. what? Then 3/4ths of the way into the book it gets woke for no reason.

In the beginning the character Poppy is explained as a grown man in a kids body. This is funny and a great story point. Then much later, suddenly the MC who is a guy in game, is actually a woman IRL, okay… but wait, she thinks she’s a man… I almost removed the book right there, but stuck it out. Then it’s mentioned AGAIN, as well as the fact that in game “she”/MC(man) has a cock and how this is how she always felt.. wtf

This is a one and done for me with this series. I was hoping for more wonderful world building and great characters like in DCC.. but this ain’t it.

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Another Banger

Revisado: 01-21-24

Biggest dislike came from the narrator. Just the way he says a few words. Up and that at the end of a sentence and my guy sounds like Forest Gump.

The story itself was great. Anytime I came to a part of the story where I had a question for example, “where is such-n-such character?” Seth almost immediately provided that detail. I continue to look forward to this series and book 4 onwards. Fantastic work.

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Ehh it’s alright

Revisado: 01-03-24

I picked up this book after it was mentioned in the last book of the series “Super Sale on Super Hero’s”. I Really enjoyed that series story. It was all over the place.
This book isn’t what I expected. I get that it’s book one of a new series, but not what I imagined. I only had two really big negatives. The automatic nicknames and the bugs. They were mentioned like 12 times.

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Is this really love?

Revisado: 12-13-23

I started this series with Travis Baldree as the voice. Now this is like the 3rd book with John and it’s not hitting the same. I’m not sure if it is just the writing that seems to have changed the old man or if it’s Johns take. But Artorian is very dark and full of vengeance throughout this story. The idea of Love having consequences seems like an attempt to lesson the darkness and it is stated multiple times. I have been struggling to finish the last few of this series which I hate myself for feeling.

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Another W

Revisado: 09-06-23

Great story, the recap at the start was nice. Seemed like a spoiler when it mentions the addition of the other voice actors and their roles. I’ve wanted this book for so long and it was 26+hrs but it wasn’t enough. The Epilogue has me hyped for the next one!!!

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A great example

Revisado: 05-27-23

This book has many great examples of both good and bad writing. The main thing with writing is “show. Don’t tell” this book provides both throughout the story.
My issue with the audio is the multiple moments of just LOUD. Still a good listen.

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The “idea” is too big

Revisado: 05-21-23 El oyente recibió este título gratis

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To start off, Over all not a bad story. There are some interesting moments. A favorite was the science books being blank, so they repurposed the pages. Neat idea on the follow up. However. I think that the biggest problem for me was the idea of “science being gone” is too much of an odd thing to be “gone”. The author knows this and references this fact and provides examples of it not really being gone.
My issue with they narrator was the lack of character difference. Multiple people sounded the same, so with the multiple transitions of perspective and story, I had to check myself to make sure who they were talking about.

Mid read, but a good length to the story. Keep up the good work author McNevin

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Not my cup of tea

Revisado: 03-17-23 El oyente recibió este título gratis

There are just a few words that are so over used that it was a slough to get through. Bro, villager number (blank) and wood. I had to stop a few times to get to the end. The overall idea of the story is good. Jumping through games to revive. However The writing behind the idea didn’t do it for me. It seems written for kids but there are adult situations and several dick jokes. I’ll just say it’s not for everybody

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A solid continuation from book 1

Revisado: 02-25-23 El oyente recibió este título gratis

This is a good follow up to book one.
There are still parts of the story that are weird and don’t click in regards to the levels and powers, but the writing keeps it interesting and kind of unimportant. The ending was frustrating and it seems like the main characters from the bunker are disregarding their Bec.

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A little different

Revisado: 02-14-23

This is like the 10th sound booth audio book that I’ve listened to, and by far the most distracting. The sounds are way loud in many areas and odd in many others. The Narrators are doing their best, to then get over powered by a carnival esc. music. That was the biggest negative for me.

There are a few good things that the author has brought to this story that you don’t see in many/any others. I like the fusion and the fight club to help with the evolving.

I like the attempt to matching multiple culture connections. But many seem forced to the story and lose some of the charm (Leeroy)

I hope the author keeps telling stories and improves.

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