Harley’s Mom

More message over content and story

Revisado: 01-11-25

Not everything has to be slap you in the face with the modern message. It is almost as if editors read the book and force the author to show horn current affairs into a story thousands of years distant. Not for me. Good luck.

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Narrator as always was great

Revisado: 08-29-24

More DEI and woke talking points trying to be disguised as entertainment. Makes no sense and feels shoe horned in by an editor. The message is deliberately placed and is so disruptive that it takes you out of the story trying to understand why it’s so important. Example of chattel slavery taking place in a fictional world just to illustrate what a “good guy” the hero is while giving no context or history about why it exists in the fictional realm. Trying to equate race relation with real world politics makes no sense in a fictional world with its own unique history. You can focus on themes of right and wrong without the virtue signaling. I do feel the author was forced to put many of these talking points in just based on the flow of the story. Not for me.

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Math

Revisado: 08-27-24

Not for me. Seems like someone who loves math and wants to show off how much they love math. Story was disjointed and was prone to having to fix power imbalances. Editor shoe horned in obvious DEI content. Made no sense in the story and felt like it was put it just to meet the woke bar.

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Represent

Revisado: 09-20-23

I guess all modern writing is about representation and who can virtue signal the most. just done with reading political propaganda books that try to pass themselves off as fantasy.

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Solid Story Solid Performance

Revisado: 08-11-23

The Good? Love the narrator. Great use of voices and understanding tone. Story was solid and entertaining.

The Bad? Author is obviously writing some personal philosophy and justifying his own beliefs with arguments that are naive and untested. Liberal use of Deus ex machina. Hey, I need a hole, I just happen to have some acid, hey! I need a non magical scrying device, I just happen to have one commissioned a few weeks back and just now remembered it. I feel this is more editorial than author though. Any editor worth their salt would have caught many of these issues. Don't get me started on the redundant word usages.

Good author, Good Narrator, Find a good editor and leave your politics out or at least don't make it a simpletons argument.

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great book bad Narrator

Revisado: 10-28-22

The book was amazing. great continuation of the Saga.

Narrator constantly mispronounced words and his monotone delivery continually pulled me from the story.

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good for kids not for older readers.

Revisado: 05-14-21

not for me. seems like the author was writing for little girls. so if you are a tween you might like it.

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Pretty damn good

Revisado: 12-10-20

This one made an old cowboy cry. Can't wait for the next one. Now get back to work.

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