M. Brock

What stands out the most about this book is the constant, almost ever presence disrupting stat and log information.

Revisado: 12-24-24

As mentioned in the title of this review, listening to this book is very difficult. If it were not free I would have stopped at the beginning of chapter 4. The story concept is actually pretty good as far as the genre is concerned. The narrator does his best and is very good with the very poor dialogue and terrible characters. I will not be spending money on the rest of this series.

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Narration disrupts the fun

Revisado: 03-25-24

I hated the total disruption caused by shouting out the names of skills and classes with a brief pause before and after. But the story itself kept me there, enduring the disruption. If the second book does not get rid of it there is no way I’m getting the next book

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Intelligence dampening effect

Revisado: 12-10-22

Written and narrated as if it is meant for children from 4-6 years old. Every moment was agony, and it felt like my intellect was being drained with each sentence. I ultimately could not go on past chapter 6.

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Started out very bad so far

Revisado: 09-17-21

1) She is supposed to be an experienced Demon Hunter. First encounter she charges up and jumps on his back? Really? That is…so…middle school. What the hell! That’s how you kill powerful demons. Jump on their backs and try to break their necks?

She went from on being his back, trying to break its neck, to a distance away with someone between her and the demon without transition. Demon throws a knife and she catches it out of the air and stabs the demon…huh? Stabs the demon from a distance far enough away to allow her to catch it out of the air? If she is using her telekinesis the writer should have said so. But that’s not how it reads.

I hope it gets better.

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Absolutely unreadable. Had to give up.

Revisado: 09-17-21

1) Narrator is fantastic, but there is only so much she can do with such sloppy writing.
2) the combat scenes are so ridiculous that I simply cannot suspend my disbelief. It was the scene behind Sky’s house with Mikayla that was the last straw.
3) The main character is simply too inconsistent with just about every thing she does or says.
4) there is no transition to most scenes. No transition between when one character speaks at the end of one scene with no clear ending, and the next when a different character speaks. Or when the characters move from one location to the next with no warning. The narration begins again with no hint about what is going on, who is talking, or where they are. There is a whole lot of guess work needed by the reader. This left me confused and frustrated.

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First person narration total fail

Revisado: 04-21-21

Right off the bat, this book completely misses the mark with its first person narration. Always being in the moment is very exhausting for readers. But, however, just in case....(this idiotic repeated phrasing style permeates the book saying the same thing again and again in different ways) I decided to hold on and keep reading due to its high acclaim. I could not make it past chapter 19. The oh so very important, world shattering, apocalyptic secret that just might explain what is actually going on is yet again withheld from the reader.

It’s like the author has no idea what is going on so, hell, why not make that lack of information a major plot line? Let the reader keep guessing too! Why the hell not? Not wasting anymore time on this trash.

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Present tense narrative is difficult to listen to

Revisado: 04-06-21

I definitely do not recommend this book. Every sentence sounds like it’s own paragraph describing a list or an order of events rather than a story or narrative. I did my beat to give it a shot but could not pull it off.

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Not a fan

Revisado: 04-02-21

Thankfully the book was free. Warning ref harem was good. Story sucks. No personality in the main character.

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Sucks

Revisado: 11-23-20

1) this book has nothing to do with time travel.
2) incredibly predictable.
3) service to the plot means the main character makes decisions that are completely contrary to common sense.

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The ending was horrible

Revisado: 04-25-20

The biggest problem is how the hero is treated after defeating the villain. As a reader I would like to have some empathy for the realm in which the hero exists. The way things ended I could care less about the realm or about what happens next.

If the treatment of the hero of this story is meant to be some sort of progression tool, or an effort to solicit a desire to see how he emerges from his new challenge, it was wasted on this reader.

Having said all that, the author’s narrative method was excellent. The way the story was read and performed was fantastic. I’d recommend this book for that reason alone. All the way up to the end, it was great.

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