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Could have used a better editor

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2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-27-05

Yes this is the Great Fantasy Novel That Almost Could. Good characters, engaging ideas --only one problem. The author and his editors "tell" the action instead of "showing" the emotion. Characters are forever twisting about ANGRILY, stomping off into stereotypes, reacting like 3rd rate actors and it really detracts from the story, which is otherwise quite good. I thought this was a good first effort, not really knowing the author, but I was sadly mistaken, the second book is similar to the first, holding out a promise that is mostly fulfilled. I'm moving off in search of a better author -- i.e. there is a reason this book is half off folks.

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