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Samantha

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Amazing Narrator lacking author

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
1 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-08-24

The Narrator did an amazing job turning an incomplete ruff draft into a entertaining experience.

This feels like a completely differnt story then the first book. A lot of characters are given new behaviors and motives to fit new plots the author keeps thinking up. The story keeps contradicting itself when it comes to facts and lore. its like the author is just randomly writing whatever their mood dictates without any consideration for editing or fulfilling any story plot.

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A thrilling story about a young woman finding her place in an unique modern fantasy world.

Total
4 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
4 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 08-06-24

Let me start off saying really enjoyed listening to this story and plan to do so again. But unfortunately three major flaws stood out to me.

First problem is that the author should have spent time going over the whole story and making edits so everything is more cohesive. Later in the book there is some minor world building and character background that I think should be a least be hinted at in earlier chapters. But most jaring to me is there are a few chapters that end in short cliffhangers only to have the next chapter start by going over the same event in more detail sometimes even contradicting the previous chapters ending.

Second is that the main character is too OP when it comes to combat. I find this balanced by the fact that a lot of conflict in this book comes from social and societal probems. Still when it comes to combat the main character is practically a mary sue.

The third and final issue I found is that the book doesn't reach any sort of conclusion for any of the stories overall plot points. The main character has a major achievement then a plot twist is thown in as a cliffhanger right before the book ends. This has left me feeling like I have listened to only 2/3 of a full book.

Despite my rather clinical review the narrater did a fantastic job and I do have to recommend this book to anyone who can overlook those flaws. I just wish the auther did some more editing before publishing.

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