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A long haul with sharp turns.

Revisado: 09-28-23

Had fun with the adventuer and the story never goes where you would expect.
We have avoided a lot of the moving parts that were a large part of Chatfields other series for good and ill. We have more character growth and while Luke is running across alien worlds I miss everyone else that far away.
I only feel I am missing something when a project, plan, or wepon is mentioned and I don't already now what it is. The pay off is the cool surpises when they all come together makes it worth the wait.

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A great time all around.

Revisado: 04-12-23

A lot of fun and a great Book 2. Looking forward to the next book.

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Never suffered a more self-centered main character

Revisado: 06-16-22

This girl is a little monster, bring back Heart-Stiker characters ASP because even though I disagreed with them at times I still felt for them and wanted to see them succeed, Opal I just want to lose before she drags everyone else around her down. So far the DFZ is a very sad and depressing second next to the Heartstrikers series.
Nothing to be said against the narration here they just don't have much to work with in these novels.

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A great ending.

Revisado: 09-12-21

This was a great ending to great series, the teaser for the upcoming series legendary.

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Garith I cry for him.

Revisado: 11-01-20

Guys Garith is so bad in this,
poor guy is dieing of a breathing illness couldn't have lived to the next book.

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I love this tale.

Revisado: 12-30-19

So this is a tale of a man that has lost the will to live, but at the same time, he can not bring himself to take his own life. Unable to find his own way in life his brother sends him on a quest. While trying to solve this task he finds a reason to fight on.

A good story and even good smut are in this tale.everything that is advertised is here while leaving the reader with a deep world that is yet unexplored. To be delved in to, in the next book.

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As a reader, my major complaint is in chapter 16, the main character gets captured as part of the story. As a long term reader of fiction, it is a skippable part of the story or unimportant. I personally have complaints as a person that understands violence please never hit someone in the temple to knock them unconscious as you will most likely kill them.

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Still need to be edited.

Revisado: 11-01-19

Good work on Eric's part. The narrator's great as always. A few chapter needs editing.

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Can't tell you to not read but can't recommend it.

Revisado: 06-23-17

This is a Sci-fi tale of a young man from a colony of Religious Pacifists. Who after hearing of a massacre and the start of war, Questions all he was taught and takes leave of his home in the hope of protecting it. After surprise attack he finds himself in a Black ops unit, and the frontline of the war.

The pros are this is a coming of age story, so you get to watch him grow up and become a man. Also this is a single novel so you don't have to chase the story over multiple books only to find you don't like it, or forget it waiting for the next one to come out.

The con's are that Cal, the main character is emo. He is the type to feel bad about every life he takes, and mope about it. Also the author is lazy with his characters, For example Cal, is in a ten man squad with people he went to Military College for two years, the served with for more years, by the end of it you and he know nothing about these people where they are from and their sexual preference.

So in total this is an OK, but not Good Sci-fi. While the Narrator is goods rarely does he have much to work with. By the end I was satisfied but would not reread it. I don't hate anything in it enough to tell anyone to not read.


On other reviews, this is not "Heinlein's Starship Troopers" if you don't know what that is read it instead. Also this is not "erotica" while the main character has sex it is never described in any detail.

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A good endding.

Revisado: 11-27-16

A good end to a fun tail. The is won and an awesome fireworks show.

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Great endding to a awesome tale.

Revisado: 11-24-16

Jim Butcher at his best. You could not ask for more. Tavi's tale comes to an end.

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