Devon Smith

How to duct tape a book together

Revisado: 02-26-25

this story makes will of the people seem okay. however most of the story never makes sense and they just never develop or make any characters even likeable. obviously the writer has no attention span cause all throughout the book is like listening to a kid with ADHD getting distracted by anything and everything never explaining anything

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trash no even worth a cr e dit.

Revisado: 11-05-22

sucked terrible story nothing good here I'm done. how to ruin a good series and waste my time

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just why?

Revisado: 10-31-22

I'm confused book was perfect until someone decided hey erase their memories and have them work for the bad guys for no good reason also why make the store about memory loss we build a character from scratch why do it again also why get rid of all the other characters and add in the wrath....... I'm so lost then say there's 7 orbs but only collect 2 and this is the last book fml could've just killed the main characters and talked about the other characters dying in battle

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shut up and take my money

Revisado: 10-24-22

Wonderful book even better than the others. I mean lovee rook but man can you write one he'll of a story. also bless nick podehl I'll listen to any story he reads

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mage of cliche backstory

Revisado: 10-07-22

so we wasted 8 hrs to learn nothing new about the all powerful nobody wizard. seriously why write the book if you're not going to add any new info on the character. like idk what's the dark power how'd he end up with it who was his father is he royalty like why?

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I liked it

Revisado: 08-08-20

However I do wish the songs would’ve been better and maybe do better with the timeline needs more time passing by to develop. The story was good but don’t say at the end that was two months if they would’ve said two years that would’ve fixed my issues with it.... kinda takes away from how you view the character.

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Interesting story, but no true developments even by the end

Revisado: 01-07-20

Kel kade, you’ve written a good story. However, most of your story just seems random and out of place. Almost like a prequel to the spellmonger, but lacking in basic character development and a reason to care about any character in here. Plus it seems like you rushed it when you get half way. Like man the main character doesn’t have enough skills let me just make stuff up ...... now he’s awesome there he more interesting. Except no one else was developed into his story or gave any kind of good reason to even be in the story. With that said kinds dark tidings is a 10 this ill give a 6 just don’t rush your next book please.

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Mark booth, shut up and take my money!!!!!!!

Revisado: 07-31-18

Truly the must amazing 12 to 14 hours of life. I want more books mark so get off you’re but buy some more weed and other mind altering substances. I want to join in on this great adventure
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esto le resultó útil a 2 personas

Mostly only talks about himself and saying how hard it was to get his car out of an airport

Revisado: 07-12-18

Don’t get this it’s like chariot of the gods was written by a totally different man...... don’t waste your time

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