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Victoria Lyn Whitehead

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The overly dramatic and too much description of every situation.

Total
3 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 01-03-24

This was way overkill for descriptions of scenery and every moment. It went on and on and on. I feel like she’s filling space to keep the story going. Also it is entirely unrealistic that a brother would show up unexpectedly and no one do any research to make sure he is truly a brother. You should have spent some time building out that story instead of repeating scenery descriptions over and over. Also the story wasn’t consistent - in one area - Ariel and Kate came up the steps and into the kitchen - twice! Ugh. Because I’m vested to figure out what happened to the father I want to jump to the last book.

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