FemDom Story

If you like femdom this is an erotic one for you. The woman was really strict with him.

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Well written and read sizzling femdom erotica

Tinder Surprise was a nice surprise for me. While this is a fairly straight forward piece of erotica, there is a story but it is primarily hot femdom smut (smut in the best way), it's well written erotica that will definitely rev your engine if you're into such things as male chastity, pegging, tease and denial. Don't expect great depth of characters or plot (though perhaps that will build as the story continues in future volumes) but do expect hot raw femdom bdsm action.

This is a hot and sexy spank-bank book that is wonderfully narrated.

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Domination at it's best

I love reading femdom books with compliant men, and loved this book cover to cover. The trust that goes into having a relationship like this is unfathomable to me. I truly enjoyed the journey this book took me on.

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Tinder surprise

What did you like best about Tinder Surprise? What did you like least?

This is the first book in a three-part series featuring a dominant woman and a slightly younger newbie submissive man, who initially hooked up via Tinder . Nice story although it is very short.

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Very good not great

It’s was a very interesting premise of a short story and i loved the FemDom, but since it was a short story i felt like her “sultry speech” took to long at time to get out. Extending every word or ending sound was cool a time or 2 but it felt like it was done the entire time . I would really like to know what a night few chapters would be like in the plot .

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Can a student submit to his teacher?

What made the experience of listening to Tinder Surprise the most enjoyable?

An exciting story of how Alexis, an elegant dominatrix, enslaves Ethan, a college student.

The first four chapters are a hot erotic scene between the two where she takes Ethan's cherry, kicks him on the bed, straddles him and says:(ch. 4)Alexis: "I am going to unlock your cage but you must choose before or after..."..."you will give me every ounce of your submission that your tongue will bear..."think about it carefully...in the end you will have given me what I want"
Ethan: "What is that Mistress? I'm begging."
Alexis: "Ethan, I want your soul she smiled a wicked scar...make your choice now slave."

Unfortunately, we do not know Ethan's choice. Instead, ch. 5 begins with a back story about how they first met at the college bar. Ethan's friend encourages him to try out Tinder. Ethan's profile states that his preference is for: "Once, twice, three times a lady he would like to please". His friend uses Ethan's profile to locate prospective dates. Tinder provides profiles of women who might be interested in meeting Ethan. It suggests Alexis as a date. Alexis approaches him at the bar, enters her phone on his cell. Ethan texts her and she gives him directions on how to meet up.

He meets her for a first date at her hotel. Alexis tells him: "If you choose to join me then commit". Ethan says: "anything". He is instructed to wear a collar and leash and be led by the concierge as he pushes a luggage cart to her room. In Lady Alexis' room, she binds him to the luggage cart and gives him a first taste of domination. Readers will find the change of the timeline to a back story in Chapter 5 a creative way to explain how Alexis trains Ethan to be her slave. She tells him 3 rules he must observe. She gives him a metal object that he can drop as a safeword. She admires his substantial manhood and his muscular physique, the leanness of his youthful body. She begins by administering 5 domination tests to Ethan with her Domination Multipurpose Tool.

Will Ethan get aroused by mild bondage, edge play, electro-stim and a cage for his manhood? Will Alexis become fond of Ethan?

An erotic tale of female domination between a teacher and a college student.
The POV is from the 3rd person narrative. The narrative to dialog ratio is about 50/50.
my scores:
plot: 4/5
story: 4/5
erotica: 5/5
I received a free audio copy of this book and voluntarily decided to review it

What did you like best about this story?

It captures the emotional drama between an experience dominatrix and a younger virgin male

What does Sierra Kline bring to the story that you wouldn’t experience if you just read the book?

How Alexis' demanding personality manipulates Ethan to do what he secretly wants to do...despite mild protestations

If you were to make a film of this book, what would the tag line be?

I want your soul...are you willing to commit?

Any additional comments?

A cleverly crafted story that keeps the erotic momentum going throughout

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One of the best pegging stories I have ever read

Since I have had my eye on the Tinder Surprise trilogy for a while now, I jumped at the chance to give the audiobook a listen - and I am so very glad I did! While there is no doubt that Sakinaa Davies is a wonderful author, with a smart, sophisticated style that resonates so well with the female dominant perspective, it was the sultry, commanding voice of narrator Sierra Kline that really made this come alive for me. While I rarely reread stories once they are done, I could easily see myself laying back, closing my eyes, and listening to this again.

Chastity Awakening, the first part of the story, skips the preamble and thrusts us right into the heart of the affair. Already desperate in chastity, Ethan arrives at Mistress Alexis' hotel room, ready to commit - and, in this case, commitment means bending over, spreading wide, and accepting his first real penetration. As quick as she is to get into the action, however, Davies is in no rush to reach a climax. This is an exquisitely detailed, deliciously drawn-out story, where every moment of tease, temptation, and arousal is captured for the reader's attention.

With the second part of the story, Rosebud Defloration, we skip back in time to explore how Ethan and Alexis met, how he fell under her spell, and to what lengths she went to test his commitment. It is interesting to see how two very different personalities first met, and to watch her transformation from elegant lady in a bar, to dominating Lady in a hotel room. There is a lot of first-time anal play here, something that would be a few quick scenes in most books, but which is satisfyingly explored in great depth. While Davies does not shy away from virginal discomfort, she ensures that Mistress Alexis takes her time, slowly opening her slave, and allowing him to become accustomed to such intimate submission without unnecessary pain to confuse his emotions.

With Orgasm Ruination, we continue on from that second part of the story, ready to see just how Ethan will follow through on his foolish boast of making her feel like a lady not once, not twice, but three times. The BDSM elements of female domination really come into the scene here, complete with handcuffs, blindfolds, ballgags, headphones, and the inventive use of a luggage cart as a restraint table. Mistress Alexis shows her cruel streak here, putting Ethan through his paces as she asks questions he cannot answer, and then punishes him with some pulses of electricity, directly into his manhood. By the time the question of chastity comes about, there is no doubt that he will say yes.

As a story, Tinder Surprise is one of the better female domination stories I have read in quite some time, and probably one of the best pegging stories I have ever come across. I suspect I will be giving her Coffeeshop Dominatrix series a read before long. As an audiobook, it is far-and-away the most pleasurable I have ever listened to - so much so that I already have my eye on a few other titles that Kline has narrated.

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Amazing

Started listening to this book and could not stop. Great story line and narrative. Hope to find more like it

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